The loading screen is awesome. However, the flavor of it doesn't really translate well onto the model, mostly because I think your artistic liberties taken in the loading screen don't accurately reflect her actual model. Lina has a rather round face in actuality. Her face is taller and more angular in the loading screen. Not to mention the eyes. Sorry, but I think this set would only really work if Lina were more "elvish" than human as far as physicality goes.

Thank you guys!

Wow, this is really wild and different, but it's really well done! Great job! Also, the skirt of the dress is fine with me.

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The idea is fascinating, the creativity is insane. The color palette is wide, rich as well as lively. But, you totally killed her fiery "revealing" nature with that odd dress on her bottom. My opinion is, if you rather put her on a half revealing skirt, it would be prettier and more reasonable.