Dota 2
Flourishing Firebug
7 Comments
Jaru Feb 27, 2015 @ 8:41pm 
I'm in love with this set :( pls valve add it
StarryMight Feb 23, 2015 @ 9:43am 
Nice! Your backstory and concepts in the Descriptions were an interesting read, too!

Maybe the pieces do look a bit plastic as Lord Baryonyx pointed out, but they look alright in game to me...still, I would suggest looking at how the default model's clothes are textured and rework the textures on your pieces accordingly.

Even so, Upvoting! :B1:
Duz Feb 22, 2015 @ 12:56pm 
Usually when a new artist debuts on a workshop, the texturing on their work is too busy. They add too much unneccesary detail, use too many colors, and make sets that overall don't fit the aesthetic of the game. In your case, however, it seems that the texturing work on this Lina set doesn't quite have enough detail, making it seem plastic and cartoony in contrast with the rest of the game. You've certainly got the skill to be a workshop artist, and if you keep working on items, improving your concepts and execution of sets, I'm sure you'll get something into a chest some day.

Don't take my criticism as wholly negative, this is one of the best first-submitted items I've seen on the workshop, and it acomplishes your goal of a visibly different design as well as a design that scales excellently with lower graphics options. I'll be looking forward to your next submission.
Dread Feb 22, 2015 @ 3:54am 
Great work. The items look like it should be a full set as opposed to some "sets" just seem to be a collection of items.

*aaagghhhh...alright Fen you can let go of my arm now... ;)
NÆVIS Feb 22, 2015 @ 1:40am 
*if you don't mind
NÆVIS Feb 22, 2015 @ 1:40am 
hi..., i just want to offer you some ideas from my mind, if don't mind to work together with me, could you help me for 3d modeling please?, it's my honor if you are intrested

thank you ;), nice lina's skirt btw