What are you supposed to do after you suck the cube into the tube

@Twenty Four

what part scared the shit outta you?

Thx is not a word. It is "Thanks" and dude, please speak english forever a lot for the whole time every single day in 2013 through 2020.

a little tedious but not bad for a first go. you scared the shit out of me at one point! LOL could use some music tho. Great job, Keep it up!

Thx dude. I have 2 other Hammer-Maps. I tried to create a storyline, maybe you would try these. Thx for playing and commenting

Dude, for a first Hammer map, it was great! The layout of the chamber was cool but then you threw that explosion which landed the player underground...that was awesome! The explosions + earthquake made that moment incredible. The crane was unexpected, though like some ppl said it was kinda boring after a while, but nonetheless amazing work. I hope to see more of your awesome Hammer creations!

yeah, I should remove the grates or change them to a door...

Good work, but boring during the crane chamber!!!

That was fun,nice work

Wonderful use of the crane

lol, you spend a lot time at the crane part ^^ not as clear as I thought

Hi. Here is my blind play of this map. Check the video description to find your part. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rFHvFsFd-yY

Great map!!!

thx
@DxL3927: I thought so too, but it's not a big accomplishment at well, you just have to know, how to make it, it's very easy ^^

For a first Hammer map, the 'crane game' aspect was rather impressing. Well done. Though, having to return the 'crane' to the hole in the ceiling to reload was a little time-consuming.

Nive job. I've been teaching myself Hammer for a little while now. Needless to say, having a workshop compatible chamber is a big accomplishment. Keep it up!

This is something I expect a college student to come up with for a project. It is not very Portal-like.

Try my coop map?
http://www.steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails?id=181160432

yeah, you must first activate the fuse on the wall leftside of the entrance to turn the power on

Heh. What I meant was I didn't get the on-screen text telling me how to make the cube drop, etc. I got the "no power" and "locked" messages but not the others.

You are not the only one, who was confused in crane room ;-)

I had to watch the video posted below because I wasn't getting any of the hints in the crane room.

Yeah, you should get the vote-screen at the end

I, too, am impressed with this being your first Hammer map... impressive. The whole spirit of the place was absorbing.
Was there anything after breaking the glass?

Hey, thx for your feedback. In cause of all the motivation I've decided to make another map and create a storyline for the following maps. The first one is complete (maybe I have to add some details, but it works). It's a small map only, build for starting the storyline and to get the portalgun.
Link: Left alone - Part 1 - Escape

I made a blind run of 10 chambers and yours was one of them. The description lists the maps in the order they were played in the video. Happy portaling!

Spoiler video: http://youtu.be/i7-LklMpdFE

incredibly!!!! I bow respectfully

thanks very much!!

thx for all the comments and playing xD

@Hobby Boy: Did you see the cubes in the crane room?

@commander2005: I'm working on a new map, but when I finished, I can take a look at your problem, but I can not promise I'm able to help you, I'm just a greenhorn yet ^^

I cant even make a hammer map this awesome!

What are you meant to do after breaking the glass with the crane? I can't work out which way to go, as the other door doesn't open.

first hammer map? hmm. other people cannot do this after 200 maps and 5 years :)
anyway, one of the best map i played in the last 6 months!
if you have time, please vsit my "harris wheel" because i have an ask:
perhaps you can tell me how to build a carousell (exactly like the laser machine),
so the "player" cannot hurl/sling or squirm through and out of the rotating and moving car.
in the big roundabout a ride is possible, but sometimes the player also stucks.
thanks!

Yes, it was my first, but it had taken a long time to do all that things. Learning by doing ^^ Next map(s) will be completed faster I hope

first hammer map?!?! this is actually awesome! i dont know how you do guys are able to make such crazy maps with all the controllable things and all that but its awesome, keep up the good work man

Very nice. Keep at Hammer. I thought the crane part worked well and wasn't clunky at all.

Excellent work, thumbs up! I had no problem figuring out what to do after just a little throught and exploration.

Good map with some interesting ideas. Took me a while to figure out the crane part but I got through in the end. Cheers.

Yes, I know about that... Maybe I will add something for better orientation.

@Corbinator: You don't need Hammer to play that map, it's just made with Hammer. You can play it like any other map in Portal 2

The part i think should be more clear is: after you got your dual-portalgun I (at first) didn't know where to go.

This is is just a pint to make you a better map-maker. :)

Hammer Is TO Hard :[

When I Use Hammer I CAN'T Play It OR Export it to Portal 2.....CAN YOU HELP ME???????

Yes, it seemed really clunky and slow. I tried out higher velocitys, but that didn't look like reality... Although you just need to transport the cube for the glass-breaks... You can bomb the grates without using it, carry it all the way to the grates works too.

And thx for playing and commenting it :-)

Awesome job! It was well done for your first Hammer map. Although, I didn't really like the crane part, it seemed clunky and slow. keep up the great work.

As seen in description there are no complicated puzzles in the map. My focus was on working with Hammer and make things possible, trying out some ideas and work on the solution.

I tried out Hammer just because I was interested in doing that things, I couldn't do with the in-game editor and there is a mass of application possibilities while working with the Authoring Tool.

It took a long time and many many tutorials while working on this map. And, of course, I only scratch on the surface with my experience now. Hope to get faster and more creative in future.

I would be glad for comments :-)

And sorry for my english, I'm not a native English speaker ^^