The second focus in Austrias cummunim branche
Revoltion in the Austria
I think it would make more sence if it would say
Revoltion in Austria

I apologize for any misspellings jus like you english is not my first langauge

Originally posted by Abditus:

The second focus in Austrias cummunim branche
Revoltion in the Austria
I think it would make more sence if it would say
Revoltion in Austria

I apologize for any misspellings jus like you english is not my first langauge

Yeah it makes more sence if i would say like that thanks for report in localisation i am going to change it

Miklos Horthy no Horthly

Hey, if you're willing, I'd be happy to redo all the focus names and descriptions. Just message me.

I've played Yugoslavia, and when I looked at all of the focus' names, I wanted to report *every* single spelling/grammar error in the focus' names! Also, every single "of" and "with" should be lowercase!

Political Branch:
I think it should be "The 1936 Elections",
It should be "Multi-Ethnic Government" and "Socialist Multi-Ethnic Government",
"Get rid of The Croatian Uprisings" and "Send The Croatian Garrison"
"Get rid of The Bosnian Uprisings" ("rid" and "of" should be lowercase) and "Send The Bosnian Garrison"
"Get rid of The Macedonian Uprisings" (Also, why is there a Serbian flag on there?) and "Send The Macedonian Garrison"
"Give Leadership to Ljubomir Davidovic" and "Give Leadership to Tito"
Would be nicer if it was "A Stable Yugoslavia"
"Alliance with The USSR" (Yes, this time there has to be a "The" before it).

Industrial Branch:
"Sarajevo Plan", not "Saravejo Plan".

Civil War Branch:
"Yugoslav Civil War"
"Create our Partisans"
Feel like it should be "Reinforce The Yugoslav National Army"
Side Note: The Civil War is a bit too short if you just garrison your divisons where the enemies would start. So I feel like you should decrease the time of the focuses to all be 21 days where you *have* to be at war with the opposing ideology.

Army Branch:
It should say "Yugoslav", not "Yugoslavian" for every focus *in this branch*.
"Motorized Research"
"Yugoslav Infantry Equipment"
"Yugoslav Artillery" and "Yugoslav Anti-Air" (Maybe also have it add 1 Anti-Air in Central Serbia, Bosnia and Croatia?)
"Small Navy" and "Big Navy"
"Naval Programs"
"Yugoslav Air Force" (Air Force is 2 words!)

Also, I know that this should probably be in suggestions, but either make a way to get rid of or upgrade the "Serbian General Staff" National Focus or just completely remove it from the start, and another question, why do you have to pick between Tito and Davidovic when Tito is already in charge of the country when you go communist? Maybe give them some nice buffs?

Thank you for reading this, and I will probably post some more stuff in the future about other countries, but Yugoslavia was the first one in this mod that I played.
I know that this may be a lot of work and sorry if this is a bit too long, but I hope this helps you improve your english skills!

Originally posted by Reenix:

I've played Yugoslavia, and when I looked at all of the focus' names, I wanted to report *every* single spelling/grammar error in the focus' names! Also, every single "of" and "with" should be lowercase!

Political Branch:
I think it should be "The 1936 Elections",
It should be "Multi-Ethnic Government" and "Socialist Multi-Ethnic Government",
"Get rid of The Croatian Uprisings" and "Send The Croatian Garrison"
"Get rid of The Bosnian Uprisings" ("rid" and "of" should be lowercase) and "Send The Bosnian Garrison"
"Get rid of The Macedonian Uprisings" (Also, why is there a Serbian flag on there?) and "Send The Macedonian Garrison"
"Give Leadership to Ljubomir Davidovic" and "Give Leadership to Tito"
Would be nicer if it was "A Stable Yugoslavia"
"Alliance with The USSR" (Yes, this time there has to be a "The" before it).

Industrial Branch:
"Sarajevo Plan", not "Saravejo Plan".

Civil War Branch:
"Yugoslav Civil War"
"Create our Partisans"
Feel like it should be "Reinforce The Yugoslav National Army"
Side Note: The Civil War is a bit too short if you just garrison your divisons where the enemies would start. So I feel like you should decrease the time of the focuses to all be 21 days where you *have* to be at war with the opposing ideology.

Army Branch:
It should say "Yugoslav", not "Yugoslavian" for every focus *in this branch*.
"Motorized Research"
"Yugoslav Infantry Equipment"
"Yugoslav Artillery" and "Yugoslav Anti-Air" (Maybe also have it add 1 Anti-Air in Central Serbia, Bosnia and Croatia?)
"Small Navy" and "Big Navy"
"Naval Programs"
"Yugoslav Air Force" (Air Force is 2 words!)

Also, I know that this should probably be in suggestions, but either make a way to get rid of or upgrade the "Serbian General Staff" National Focus or just completely remove it from the start, and another question, why do you have to pick between Tito and Davidovic when Tito is already in charge of the country when you go communist? Maybe give them some nice buffs?

Thank you for reading this, and I will probably post some more stuff in the future about other countries, but Yugoslavia was the first one in this mod that I played.
I know that this may be a lot of work and sorry if this is a bit too long, but I hope this helps you improve your english skills!

Wow thank you so much for the localization reports, I will begin to make these changes to the mod, thanks for writing about localization problems