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The Building

part 2 Now to the good: the track is built in a very interesting way, there's a lot of diversity in the track and as I said: you use decorations in a creative way.

Please keep in mind that I don't want to insult you in any way. If I didn't see potential in this map I would've downvoted it and moved on with my life. But instead I sat down and wrote down things, that I thought you could improve.
Hope that this helps you ^^
(btw subscribed to the thread so I can see your reply if you feel like making one)

Part1 I know that giving people a negative rating doesn't help them, so I'll you feedback. First of all: there's too much nothing happening. If you don't add any obstacles, transfers or something too look at (more on that later), that part of the track is worthless. Second: this track is easily skipable: wings are on, roads are near each other et cetera. Third: Some objects are really off center or just look out of place at those angles. I recommend you take a close look at the tools on the right side of the editor. Fourth: Decoration: As I mentioned: good decoration can justify an entire track segment with nothing on it. that is if it looks good. You used decorations in creative ways sometimes (I really liked the building that you used as a ramp) but most of the deco seems... random. as if it was put there just that there is something there. It helps to theme segments of the track or the entire track. also look into the skyboxes submenu in the editor. it can help you set a mood.