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0.0 hrs last two weeks / 8.3 hrs on record (7.5 hrs at review time)
Posted: Nov 24, 2016 @ 10:16am

Lost in the alleys of Lahoreh
I melt into the azure blue air
Faceless in the milling foray
While sliders slide with awesome flair
Canal water reflects my face
Amid old stones long worn by time
Seeking a reflection on the bridge of lace
I catch a whiff of oghar and lime
I follow my steps to Jahangir
The garden of haunted lovers
The scent of flowers soothes my melanghir
With tales of jousts and plumed plovers



- dav idka'j poetry
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Dolanmanzer0 Jan 17, 2020 @ 6:20pm 
man, this sequel to Jabberwockey needs some work...