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发布于:2016 年 11 月 24 日 上午 10:16

Lost in the alleys of Lahoreh
I melt into the azure blue air
Faceless in the milling foray
While sliders slide with awesome flair
Canal water reflects my face
Amid old stones long worn by time
Seeking a reflection on the bridge of lace
I catch a whiff of oghar and lime
I follow my steps to Jahangir
The garden of haunted lovers
The scent of flowers soothes my melanghir
With tales of jousts and plumed plovers



- dav idka'j poetry
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Dolanmanzer0 2020 年 1 月 17 日 下午 6:20 
man, this sequel to Jabberwockey needs some work...