Homeworld Remastered Collection

Homeworld Remastered Collection

Complex EVO [HW Remastered]
Jollycat Jul 29, 2019 @ 4:20am
Grammatical Errors
In the intro you have spelt "history" and "ancient" wrong. You've spelt it as "hystery" and "anceint". If you want, I would happily proofread any future text for you. Send me a message if you are interested. My first language is English
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beghins  [developer] Aug 1, 2019 @ 1:17pm 
Hey, thank you, below the whole text file of the first episode, if you want to take a look, I can correct errors, but I can't make substantial changes.
Edit it as you want, but I must find what you change, you can reply here or send me a mail to beghins@homeworld2complex.com, thank you

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1000000 Scavenger, team green, we are approaching to the asteroid.
1000001 Team green, we are close to the asteroid, permission required to launch the drilling missile.
1000002 Fleet intel, permission granted, you can launch.
1000003 Cover, lanching in: 4, 3, 2, 1.
1000004 we are losing the Scavenger one! The impact with the asteroid is imminent!
1000005 Fleet intel, alarm received! You are not alone, we are sending ships.
1000006 Here Perimeter Station one. Alarm received. Interceptors, take-off allowed.
1000007 Super Sensor array activated, area scanning started.
1000008 Interceptors on route. Speed Burst activated.
1000009 Fleet intel, permission granted to destroy the asteroid.
1000010 Copy, we are proceeding to the target. Firing in: 3, 2, 1.
1000011 We suppose the Scavenger was hit by a very powerful magnetic pulse. The origin is unknown, but we have detected an anomalous signal, it's coming from an unexplored area and it's incredibly strong.
1000012 The signal comes from this nebula, we detect the presence of ancient wrecks and derelicts, in this area a violent battle was fought many years ago, no one has ever entered there since then.
1000013 Fleet Intel, the Scavenger has been hold, we have to analyze the on-board data. A new Carrier is jumping in, take command and prepare to hyperspace.
1000014 We are decrypting the signal, it seems a request for help, someone is calling us.
1000015 Fleet Intel, on-board data analyzed, we confirm, the Scavenger was hit by a strong magnetic discharge, all systems are down.
1000016 Organize a shipment to the area of the signal, located here.
1000017 Be careful... the wave of the signal has covered one million kilometers, someone else may have been warned.
1000018 Lieutenant, do not attack the asteroids, keep the area intact.
1000019 Lieutenant! You are relieved of duty. You broke my direct orders!
1000020 Lieutenant, we detected you're entering into the nebula, the radiation is at a slight level, proceed cautiously, at the moment we do not detect anything anomalous.
1000021 Fleet Intel, we can not activate the hyperspace inside the nebula, reach the place with the power of the engines, the drive module is able to provide an additional propulsion.
1000022 Here Perimeter Station one, we are detecting many unknow radio signals, they are disturbed, but very close to you, make sure you have activated your sensors array, and stay alert!
1000023 We are decrypting the radio signals, they are not coming from the origin, but from all around, it is an ancient pirate language.
1000024 Turanic Raiders... they are around. Lieutenant, prepare to engage! The radiations are damaging the hull, you have few minutes to stay there, analyze the signal and repel the attack!
1000025 Good job! The Turanic Raiders have been defeated, the area is secure. Reach the origin of the signal, the perimeter station is ready to start analyzing. The Carrier's hull is suffering the nebula radiation now, move quickly and bring the ship back to the base!
1000026 Lieutenant, the bombers are attacking the engines to immobilize the ship, destroy those bombers!
1000027 The Carrier has been destroyed...
1000028 We are approaching the target, the Carrier's hull is suffering the radiations quite well, for now. We can hear the radio noise, they seem devilish... if there's a God, he has forgotten this place...
1000029 We are detecting something of extremely massive, the signal is really close, but we can't see anything.
1000030 My God... It's the Pride Of Hiigaran.
1000031 Cover, we proceed, ready to engage...
1000032 This legendary ship is our story, it was abandoned 200 years ago after a terrible battle, when the three hyperspace cores were unified and the eye of Aarran was discovered. it's calling us... We must discover what's happening.
1000033 We are sending two support modules with technical and analysis crew, one module will assist the Carrier, the other one will enter into the Mothership, the Perimeter Station will manage the operations. Defend the area until the data analysis is complete.
1000034 Here the support module two, the docking maneuver has been initiated.
1000035 We are entering the ship, no signs of life, no activity.
1000036 Ready to connect and transfer data.
1000037 The Turanic Raiders are coming through the hyperspace, they want to destroy the Mothership using powerful Ion Frigates, defend the Mothership!
1000038 The Mothership has been destroyed...
1000039 Good job, the area is secure.
1000040 Here Perimeter Station one, we are reading the on-board data, the transmission comes from far away, we can not trace the source. It seems the Mothership is an huge radio bridge, someone is using it and wants to communicate with us.
1000041 The transmission comes from another galaxy, or dimension. Who speaks is a scientist, she was inside the Mothership, she led the Mothership here, then the three hyperspace cores were unified.
1000042 Her name is Karan S'Jet...
1000043 This message has been flowing through the universe for over 100 years, Karan sacrificed herself to get it here. She is warning us, because something evil is going to happen.
1000044 The universe, the stars, everything is in danger. There really exists a great network of hyperspace gates and it is possible to cross them. The reunification of the three was just the final piece of this vision. The most ancient and evil race of the universe, it has created this with a single view: the extinction of life except the origin, themselves, the Progenitors. They call this: the Purification.
1000045 They will come because they know that Karan S'Jet has betrayed them, they know that the "chosen one", the "renegade", has stolen their technologies, and knowledge, and is giving them to her people... to us.
1000046 Karan S'Jet learned how to use the hyperspace network, she sent the hyperspace core to who found her Mothership, Karan wants to protect the last hope of the universe. The hyperspace core is arriving...
1000047 We have the cordinates, they point here. It's a space-time warp, it seems to be able to absorb the whole universe at any moment. We believe it's an hyperspace gate of the great network. Karan is sending the core and wants we go there.
1000048 Fleet Intel, The alarm level is maximum, stop all activities and wait for orders. We are sending support ships to repair the Mothership. New advanced systems of cloaking and energy management are going to be installed on the Mothership.
1000049 The Turanic Raiders are around, they are stealing resources. Now you are a commander, you have new units available. Destroy the Turanic Raiders! We will give support with Interceptors squadrons.
1000050 Then reach the hyperspace gate, recover the core, we need it to activate the Mothership. Be careful, the level of radiations is very high and we don't know what you will find there.
1000051 Repairing operations started.
1000052 Mothership repaired, it can move. The Scaffold is ready, we're starting the docking operations.
1000053 Fleet Intel, we're recovering the Mothership, the mobile Scaffold will take it out of the nebula. Make the area safe, we need a lot of resources to start the upgrade operations.
1000054 Good job Commander, the Turanic Raiders have been destroyed, the area is secure, we can start the massive extraction of resources.
1000055 The upgrade of the Mothership is at 30 percent.
1000056 The upgrade of the Mothership is at 60 percent.
1000057 The upgrade of the Mothership is at 90 percent.
1000058 The mobile scaffold is equipped with the hyperspace module, it allows us to move through a limited area by the hyperspace jump, you can use it to exit the nebula with the carrier, if necessary.
1000059 We have the contact with the core, it seems intact and functioning, take control and take it to the Mothership!
1000060 We can launch the Mothership...
1000061 We are losing the Mothership control...
1000062 Commander, we are detecting a massive intrusion in the area. The improved Mothership will be launched as soon as possible, we need the core!
1000063 Mothership alignment and test, started.
1000064 Stationary anchors, detached and removed.
1000065 The engine and the navigation systems recognize the input.
1000066 The propulsion can provide a sufficient thrust, the ship can move, all standard drives are operational.
1000067 Fleet command on-line.
1000068 Engineering, installed and operational.
1000069 Modular weapon systems, fully charged.
1000070 Resourcing process activated, the harvest units are ready for launch.
1000071 Cloak and shadow system, installed, the ship can hide while it moves.
1000072 Hyperspace drive fully operational, waiting to connect the core.
1000073 Power level optimized, all standard drives are supported, all nuclear reactors triggered.
1000074 Advanced defensive shields, on-line.
1000075 The Mothership is standing by and it's ready to be connected to the hyperspace core...
1000076 We are detecting the presence of Karan S'Jet.
1000077 The core is operating at full capacity.
1000078 The Mothership is standing by.
1000079 The Keepers are here, we must leave the area, immediately, we can not engage any battle at the moment.
1000080 We are detecting an unexpected power surge, it seems that an intrusion into the systems has generated a massive wave of energy... something is overriding our command.
1000081 All systems on-line.
1000082 She has returned, to her Mothership.
1000083 The convoy has been destroyed, the hopes for our people are over.
1000084 ...
1000085 We sent a convoy of specialized personnel and crew, it's an evacuation expedition, protect it, we're detecting a massive squadron of Droids intercepting the convoy!
1000086 We come to purify...
1000087 We come to save you...
1000088 Crew transport docked.
1000089 Subsystem and engineering personnel transferring.
1000090 Sensor crews transferring.
1000091 Research staff and science teams transferring.
1000092 Engine and powerplant crews transferring.
1000093 Elite fighter pilots transferring.
1000094 Elite corvette crews transferring.
1000095 Crew transfer complete.
1000096 The Core, has been destroyed.
1000097 The keepers are attacking by experimental surface bombs.
1000098 These weapons can invert the force of gravity, increasing the heat of the planet drastically.
1000099 In few hours the atmosphere will be canceled.
1000100 The planet will explode.
1000101 The Keepers will find us and they will come to destroy, we can't face them. The explosion of the planet has generated an huge breach in the network, we suppose it's an enormous growing black hole. We must try to leave the area from there, it's our last possibility. Move the Mothership inside the breach, immediately!
1000102 The planet's health is at 80%
1000103 The planet's health is at 60%
1000104 The planet's health is at 40%
1000105 The planet's health is at 20%
1000106 The story is at the end, everything is lost, what remains is our will to survive this cruel, evil universe.
1000107 It seems they can handle unknown technologies, we are experiencing deformations in the space-time line, the damage is incalculable.
1000108 The Mothership has improved defense systems, build the heat shield and produce the required energy to keep the shield active, the explosion will bring the temperature above 1000 degrees for a short time.
1000109 The Mothership upgrade is complete, we are waiting for the core to proceed with the launch.
1000110 Commander, we report a massive enemy movement around us, organize the defences and establish a base, we cannot estimate what is going to happen, wait for orders.
1000111 We are alone, we do not detect the presence of survivors, our home no longer exists.
1000112 Commander, you have the responsability of our surviving, the Mothership is equipped with advanced navigation and defense systems, it can move silently like a shadow and it's able to navigate through the radiations, the Mothership can withstand extreme temperatures using the heat shields. Reach the escape area, move silently, the Keepers must not discover our position. We assume that near the escape area there are temperatures above 1000 degrees, be sure to activate the heat shield.
1000113 We are moving too noisily, the Keepers can intercept our route, we must keep the threshold of detectability below 40. Reduce the noise by moving in evasive and passive mode, reduce the engines power, you can also disable the sensors.
1000114 The Keepers have discovered our route, they know our position. Alarm level is maximum, prepare to receive massive attacks, enable weapons and defenses. We must take the Mothership inside the breach.
1000115 We recognize the core, wait for orders.
1000116 We detect an huge gravity well around the meeting point, you can't use the hyperspace inside the nebula. Move the carrier near to the meeting area, the core should be there, rescue it, then return to the Mothership. You must move quickly, we detect an high level of radiation around 30.
1000117 Proceed to the Mothership. The carrier is suffering heavy damage, moving in evasive mode you have more energy for the engines.
1000118 We detect an huge dust cloud, you can pass through it. The dust cloud provides cover from the enemy radars, and the Mothership is less detectable.
1000119 The Keepers lost our trace, we are alone, we are hidden, proceed to the objective.
1000120 We can see the breach, we continue to advance.
1000121 The shields are over the limit, we must leave the area!
1000122 We have the energy needed to attempt the emergency hyperspace transfer.
1000123 The engines are out of control, we are falling into the black hole, we must activate the hyperspace, immediately!
1000124 We are not able to trace the path, all sensors and guidance systems are unusable. We request permission to start the hyperspace jump.
1000125 Permission granted, we have no choice, we jump into the unknown.
1000126 Hyperspace unlocked in, 3, 2, 1...
1000127 The temperature is growing rapidly, the hull of the Mothership is holding up and the keepers cannot follow us here, we are safe for now. We must reach a distance of about 8000 meters from the breach, then we could load the hyperspace core with the energy needed to leave the area. Focus on the thermal and defense systems and progress to the objective.
1000128 We are at a distance of 11000 meters from the center of the breach.
1000129 we are at a distance of 10000 meters from the center of the breach. We start to load the hyperspace core.
1000130 we are at a distance of 9000 meters from the center of the breach. The hyperspace core is nearly loaded.
1000131 Reduce the Mothership detectability under 40, the Keepers are detecting us.
1000132 We are detecting an heavy destroyer, it is rapidly approaching, intercep and destroy it before it begins to open fire on the Mothership.
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