Team Fortress 2

Team Fortress 2

The Haunted Hat
Desertscape 2013 年 10 月 10 日 上午 9:46
The description
I'm not normally a grammar nazi, and I don't mean to put down your hard and excellent work in any way, but still, if you want this to be an official item, I suggest you fix up the grammar and punctuation of the description. Something more like:

Most would be terrified by the prospect of a purely evil ghost hat haunting their head until the day they die. You, however, wear it with pride as this season's hottest must-have fashion accessory.

Thanks
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SoulRender1 2013 年 10 月 11 日 下午 10:54 
Excellent Suggestion.
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