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The Khajiit Thief Volume I
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The Khajiit Thief Volume I

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The Khajiit Thief tells the tale of a young Khajiit woman named Zirana using her particular skill set to survive and thrive in Tamriel! With the help of her Argonian friend Skilled-with-Coin, Zirana investigates mysterious rumour surrounding the Thalmor. Rumours that could lead to everlasting wealth...or everlasting death...



This is only the first part of the story and can be bought from Lucan Valerius at the Riverwood Trader!



Written by myself purely as a writting exercise and an attempt to add a lore-friendly tale to the world of Skyrim, if this story succeeds then there will definitely be more to follow!



Please note that this is a work of fan fiction, I do not own any characters, places or events that may reference trade marked or copyrighted material that belongs to Bethesda


ALSO AVAILABLE ON THE SKYRIM NEXUS!: http://skyrim.nexusmods.com/mods/25252/
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DrazellaSinnanodel Jul 5, 2016 @ 3:24pm 
I love book mods. Keep up the grate work.
ナルト「Russian Lives Matter」言う Feb 28, 2014 @ 4:05pm 
Make it increase lockpick and all thief Skills by 10 :) as you'll learn more stuff.
Faux Booz Feb 19, 2014 @ 4:09pm 
a book mod YES SKYRIM IS COMPLETE
PD  [author] Oct 15, 2012 @ 4:46am 
No no, it's just a book :)
Zack Oct 13, 2012 @ 3:32pm 
Will it be a quest?
PD  [author] Oct 9, 2012 @ 1:37pm 
Thanks! it's always something I've wanted to do in game, literally write the books whilst playing! But then I learnt how to use the creation kit (a bit!) so decided to give it a go! This is my first attempt so there will be more depth and detail to future volumes and updates :)
Skoomafiend Oct 9, 2012 @ 1:20pm 
I haven't subscribed yet but I just wanted to say that I absolutely love the idea of adding books to the game. Can't wait to check it out :)
PD  [author] Oct 9, 2012 @ 11:29am 
deaf* ;)
PD  [author] Oct 9, 2012 @ 11:07am 
Hey, thanks for the advice! It does say that she "began to think back to the events of three days earlier" in the prologue, which is what links into the second paragraph. I think it's okay to use a colon to add emphasis to the end of a sentence though you're right about the "Unbeknownst" which I've changed to (Unbeknownst to the Count!) as a bit a light humour for the reader and also to further demonstrate her prowess! And yeah, I can totally see how it can be misinterpreted as the Redguard being death, it's just difficult to keep writing Khajiit without saying "the male Khajiit" which just sounds silly but I'll find a way! Thanks and hope you stick around for the next few volumes!
Chipper_Emperor Oct 9, 2012 @ 10:50am 
It's pretty good, but I have a few gripes. In a couple of places it doesn't flow well most memorably at the end, in one instance you use too when you should have used to, there seems to be an entire paragraph missing between her sitting on the trunk and strolling through the Bazaar, in fact it shifts so suddenly there’s almost an audible CLUNK! It should read “the reason… moonsugar” or “the reason, moonsugar” a colon is not used to create readable silence, nor is it used for pauses; you need to use either an ellipsis or a comma. "Unbeknownst to the count" needs to be reworked, or taken out (it seems out of place and breaks the flow of the story), the way one part was written made it sound like the redguard was deaf not the Kajhiit merchant. Overall it's pretty good, but it’s still rough and in need of work.