The Last of Us Fanfiction

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Hi guys i just wanted some good tips on making a story.EDIT: Ok, i got Chap 1 and 2 done. https://www.fanfiction.net/story/story_preview.php?storyid=9651850&chapter=1

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Don't shove in your fetish unless you can write well.

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Make every character die. Works well for George R. R. Martin.

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Ursprünglich geschrieben von Archduke:

1) Don't just turn the whole thing into some kind of dumb (possibly heavily sexual) convesation
2) Remember the charactrs defined by the original are not just 2D cardboard cutouts. They should have more depth than just whatever they say or do
3) Don't just rely on tropes and clichés or your own personal desires. Write in the context of the existing world that has been generated

I actually have a scene of "sexual" content. Ellie meets a boy, later in the story they fall in love but he tries to get sexual, shes about to enjoy it, but joel walks in. something lke that