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[wywy]

You can report text issue in this thread. Thank you very much

[Obi-Van-Hamster]

'Gold is not enough' message when you try to buy/upgrade something that you don't have enough gold for. Should be 'Not enough gold'.

[Obi-Van-Hamster]

'Back to homepage' option in the menu during game is missleading. Should be 'Back to main menu' as the tooltip says. I actually thought it would open a homepage of the game/developer unitl i red the tooltip.

[wywy]

Originally posted by Obi-Van-Hamster:

'Back to homepage' option in the menu during game is missleading. Should be 'Back to main menu' as the tooltip says. I actually thought it would open a homepage of the game/developer unitl i red the tooltip.

Thank you. Will fix it in v1.0.11

[devxx]

God's Alter -> Demon's <something, i can't read my notes> but text is:

"Devouring an enemy unit who's health is lower that 100, making 9999 damage"

9999 damage would devour ANYTHING :-) you probably meant 99.

[reliankru]

Some recommended changes:

• "Moral" is the wrong word. It is concerned with the principles of right and wrong behavior. The word I think you want is "Morale," the confidence, enthusiasm, and discipline of a person.
  
• "Resist Penetration" has always been confusing to me. Consider shortening it to "Penetration."
  
• "Make x% higher damage" is an awkward term. It is understandable, but not the norm for English. I recommend changing it to "Deal x% more damage."
  
• Along the same lines, "Get x% lower damage" sound more natural as "Receive x% less damage."
  
• In all cases, "Damage Received -x%" can be changed to "Reduce Damage by x%."
  
• "All your resistance increases by x" should be "All your resistances increase by x."
  
• "Health + x" should probably be "Maximum Health + x" or even "Increase Maximum Health by x."

In all the above suggestions, x represents some number in the tool tip.

[Obi-Van-Hamster]

This reminds me, what is actually 'resist penetration' supposed to be? In it's current form it sounds like you are actually resisting penetration attacks. If it's supposed to take into account reduced enemy resistance (being penetrating attack if you will), then its like reliankru said, or 'resistance penetration' at least. There seems to be a lot of really badly translated descriptions that i'm unsure what they really mean. I'll try to gather more and post here.

'Gold is not enough' message when you try to buy/upgrade something that you don't have enough gold for. Should be 'Not enough gold'.

Same applies to knowledge ('knowledge is not enough' messsage).

[reliankru]

Obi-Van-Hamster, that was my first assumption. But it almost always appears in a slice of the skill pie that is offense, implying that it is meant to make it easier to penetrate the enemies shields. I found an item that gave the ability that specifically stated it was for witches, archers, and cowboys, which also implies it is offensive in nature. That is why I made the suggestion I did.

[amandachen]

These edits need to be done carefully or you'll change the flavor of the text.

[wywy]

Originally posted by devxx:

God's Alter -> Demon's <something, i can't read my notes> but text is:

"Devouring an enemy unit who's health is lower that 100, making 9999 damage"

9999 damage would devour ANYTHING :-) you probably meant 99.

The spell is used for devouring anything who's health is lower than 100. I use 9999 damage to ensure that.

[wywy]

Originally posted by reliankru:

Some recommended changes:

• "Moral" is the wrong word. It is concerned with the principles of right and wrong behavior. The word I think you want is "Morale," the confidence, enthusiasm, and discipline of a person.
  
• "Resist Penetration" has always been confusing to me. Consider shortening it to "Penetration."
  
• "Make x% higher damage" is an awkward term. It is understandable, but not the norm for English. I recommend changing it to "Deal x% more damage."
  
• Along the same lines, "Get x% lower damage" sound more natural as "Receive x% less damage."
  
• In all cases, "Damage Received -x%" can be changed to "Reduce Damage by x%."
  
• "All your resistance increases by x" should be "All your resistances increase by x."
  
• "Health + x" should probably be "Maximum Health + x" or even "Increase Maximum Health by x."

In all the above suggestions, x represents some number in the tool tip.

Thank you for suggestion.

[wywy]

Originally posted by Obi-Van-Hamster:

This reminds me, what is actually 'resist penetration' supposed to be? In it's current form it sounds like you are actually resisting penetration attacks. If it's supposed to take into account reduced enemy resistance (being penetrating attack if you will), then its like reliankru said, or 'resistance penetration' at least. There seems to be a lot of really badly translated descriptions that i'm unsure what they really mean. I'll try to gather more and post here.

'Gold is not enough' message when you try to buy/upgrade something that you don't have enough gold for. Should be 'Not enough gold'.

Same applies to knowledge ('knowledge is not enough' messsage).

'resist penetration' is used to reduce their 'physic resist', 'magic resist' and 'explosion resist'.

[Obi-Van-Hamster]

Here is some more:

1 - Name of the autosave 'Save automatically at the beginning of turn' - should be just 'Autosave' or 'Autosave - turn start'. Current one is unnecessarily long.
2 - Barbarians upgrade for sweeping skill 'For every attack on an enemy unit, treat yourself for 30 point of health.'. Should be 'Receive 30 health for each attack on enemy unit.'.
3 - Similar to the 2nd, 'Each attack on an enemy unit, increases morale for yourself by 16 point'. Should be 'Receive 16 morale for each attack on enemy unit.'.
4 - 'Times for attack +1' in the hero upgrade screen. Should be 'Number of attacks +1'.
5 - Spider cannon's 'Anti-physical Armor' has description 'Physical resistance adds 25%.'. Should be 'Increases physical resistance by 25%.'.

[wywy]

Originally posted by Obi-Van-Hamster:

Here is some more:

1 - Name of the autosave 'Save automatically at the beginning of turn' - should be just 'Autosave' or 'Autosave - turn start'. Current one is unnecessarily long.
2 - Barbarians upgrade for sweeping skill 'For every attack on an enemy unit, treat yourself for 30 point of health.'. Should be 'Receive 30 health for each attack on enemy unit.'.
3 - Similar to the 2nd, 'Each attack on an enemy unit, increases morale for yourself by 16 point'. Should be 'Receive 16 morale for each attack on enemy unit.'.
4 - 'Times for attack +1' in the hero upgrade screen. Should be 'Number of attacks +1'.
5 - Spider cannon's 'Anti-physical Armor' has description 'Physical resistance adds 25%.'. Should be 'Increases physical resistance by 25%.'.

Get it. Thank you very much.

[FsGoD]

Just make a language file we can edit.

Edit: Found language file:
Notepad ++

C:\SteamLibrary\steamapps\common\ Legion War\LegionWar_Data\StreamingAssets\Word.json

[Lord Gek]

I think debugger text is appearing in the Wild faction units in regards to the "Ancient Power" description. I mean is the user supposed to see, "BUFF_WORD_EFFECT_ANCIENTPOWER" in the description text?