The demo at least could definitely benefit from a read-through by a proofreader or editor. I spotted over a dozen errors in the first few screens of text.

wish was a patch too but i doubt it. but i do want to romance that pink haired girl

Before the release I could access the store page but now it lands into the region restriction page. Is it intended or only the lack of local age rating is blocking the game for Brazil?

I must say I was intrigued by the story. The grammer could still do with some work and it is not always clear when a certain character is talking. How much will the rhythm minigame effect the plot or ending? I didn't do too well in it.

I prefer if there is a different sound effect added when you hit or miss in that minigame, and maybe please consider the button position in keyboard hahaha. and it would be good if we can exit backlog by right clicking :3 oh and quick save somehow deleted after the minigame other than that, good game~...