You want some store feedback?

[FateWeaver]

- Please get a native english speaker to proof read your store text.
And going by your store text I think it is safe to say you will probably need that person to proof read your in-game text as well.
It is horribly phrased. The structuring is very wrong, and some words don't even make sense in their current context.

- Also quit blowing your own horn like that. Saying things like "HEPH is the ultimate game", or "Behold we present to you the best of its kind in the field of third-party survival horror game HEPH", makes you guys look super pretentious and out of touch with reality.
And frankly it will scare away customers, and a lot of the few customers you will attract will compare you negatively to other third person survival horror games.

- Write a list of what your game contains, as in you write a point by point list, like this.

• HEPH is a third person survival horror game.
• Survive against horrific twisted abominations.
• Craft useful items with the crafting system.

etc etc, come on, this isn't hard. You guys need to put in more effort if you want your game to sell on Steam.

[Excitable Boy]

+1 I immediately shy away from games with store pages like this one. If you can't get your store page right, what's going to make me think you can make a good game?

[Creature of the Rise]

Thank you for your feedback. We'll improve what your suggested.

[Creature of the Rise]

Hello, we did re-edit the store page thanks for your suggestion.

But we think the langauge may have some mistaken on it and we still working.

Thank you.

Originally posted by FateWeaver:

- Please get a native english speaker to proof read your store text.
And going by your store text I think it is safe to say you will probably need that person to proof read your in-game text as well.
It is horribly phrased. The structuring is very wrong, and some words don't even make sense in their current context.

- Also quit blowing your own horn like that. Saying things like "HEPH is the ultimate game", or "Behold we present to you the best of its kind in the field of third-party survival horror game HEPH", makes you guys look super pretentious and out of touch with reality.
And frankly it will scare away customers, and a lot of the few customers you will attract will compare you negatively to other third person survival horror games.

- Write a list of what your game contains, as in you write a point by point list, like this.

• HEPH is a third person survival horror game.
• Survive against horrific twisted abominations.
• Craft useful items with the crafting system.

etc etc, come on, this isn't hard. You guys need to put in more effort if you want your game to sell on Steam.

[Smokey]

I dont like they show in the trailer that this is the new Crysis game as crysis was back then. this game is a complete joke compared with that game + this is 3rd person as Dead space just not half as good on any areas

also animations models sprites aint that good in my eyes.