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Where did I get it wrong, in what I wrote. LIke I said, I left ALOT out.
I can go on and on, but the way I see it, you just hit Skip, since got 90% of it wrong.
no no, I completely understood all that, and know about it all.
The problem is, what Otis said, and he describes the Queen. Which is so thoughtful and loving towards people she took in refugees of enemy nation during the cataclysm.
Sphene herself also states how much she wants peace, and loves peace.. Yet.. despite her own peoples lives "hitting a limit" which is sustainable, still decides that genocidal warfare is the option just makes no sense.
While yes great energy and power is required to sustain her people... they're the ones who decided to do it this way, not other worlds, so it still breaks character, and makes no sense.
It also makes no sense, since the only limit to their situation is they cannot create new souls to continue growth, but who cares? You have a perpetual Goldilocks where nobody can die essentially, so pushing out for genocidal warfare to gain new souls is just insane and stupid from the get go.
Or perhaps you weren't the one who was paying attention? Because while Sphenes goal was always to go on genocidal rampage, my point is, that it makes no sense from the focus of any other story point, or her own character explanation and background of who she is.
It's terribly written because of how forced it all it.. It's yet another "ohh two worlds that need to fight cuz 1 can't survive, and I'm going to force this situation cuz "plot"" LIke ShB all over again, except this time horribly written and rushed.
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It's literally ShB because you get to know the people, and back story, and the writers want you to feel for the people. That's why they have you walk around that other dimension, and see how happy the people are, yada yada, to figure out do we need to do this, and get mixed feelings like in ShB.
But again, its all forced, and rushed, every aspect of it, and it doesn't flow correctly.
Common sense, why else would she align willfully with the dork lizard? Or did you forget her words at the Golden City Gates? And why a certain someones parents were trying to stop it.
Like I said, it's like you skipped over it all...
I didn't skip. You're ignoring the parts, where I'm saying its bad becaues its all rushed, and forced.
Yes the memories are transfered over, and even the "Endless" aren't really "alive" or so the story wants to keep going back and forth on that to confuse the player further.
It has the makings of a good story. But there is juts so much bad writing, and bad writing practices in it, it all falls apart.
Also, there are story bits that don't fully conclude you're correct either. You, and even the writerse perhaps are suggesting that her love for her people, and memories, etc carry over but not the reason.
Which just again seems like sour plot hole than anything to force this world vs world situation again.
While memories transfer over, what is a soul then? Essentially a "Soul" which they don't even describe too much, is the essence of who you are too. Whichi s another issue I come too with this entire soul, memory/person jargan they went with, because there is a ton there that falls flat when you look at it with scrutiny.
Again I could write a whole thesis on this soul/memory/body crap they got going on and why it doesn't add up, but that's an entirely differnet conversation.
A heavy stark contrast between the two, in all regards.
And the souls are literally explained as aether, yet a different method. Instead of it going to the source on death, harvested, cleaned of memories and stored to be used later for another with their memories. And the reason why it's all messed up, since it's like the Voidsent as well, which was brought up many times, except due to the memory cleaning the soul is "ready to write to" for another instead of just many being one. But it was even explained that this isn't perfect, why the Endless are so weird.
I'm more shocked you weren't able to grasp this, when it was hammered into you repeatedly.
I enjoyed it, and loved how things were intertwined personally. Talking to friends on discord how for it being a "At the Beach DLC" it was darker and more cruel in design than Shadowbringers for those who read it.
If you couldn't understand it, or didn't enjoy it, nothing much I can say.
no I got that, that's actually one of the parts I liked about the story. One of the few bits of writing that was good, which is why I didn't mention it.
Yes I understood this too. But this isn't the issue I have with it.
I did understand it.. like you said, it was hammered and mentioned repeatedly.
I just don't agree it was good for the reasons I stated. Much of it felt rushed.
75% of the story is playing babysitter, and unnecessary part of the story.. Wuks rise to the throne could of been cut way way shorter, and still had her tag along with your adventures as she learns more about her people, or you tag along with her. Her brother still having a part with the Queen, and turning King, and everything else, without the baby sitting trips.
Then we have the wild west cliche story that also played almost zero part in the actual story of the MSQ.
That would of opened up 75% of the story if those bits were removed or shortened to add different story that actually pushed this Sphene narrative better, and fleshed out the bits that were rushed.
Proper character development and reason and meaning behind the brother bringing war, and his reasons that a world for peace, needs yet another genocidal rampager like Zenos at the helm to bring lasting peace, and more of Sphenes world, letting the realization they're all husks and computer data have a bigger hit to it, etc..
That's why I don't like it. A long with the other issues. While you and I disagree on Sphene, that's fair. However I made a lot of other points than just the sphene thing.
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I want to clarify.. The story itself isn't bad per say.. Just the delivery of it in every aspect, as well as many issues, forced writing/badly delivered key points, which brings it all down tremendously in my opinion.
^This
Also, you should stop engaging with people who are trying to claim you didn't properly read/understand the story to defend this horrible attempt at an ShB/EW remix that has been written with 0 understanding of the source material and barely any concept of pacing or proper characterization.
Just because some people fall for nostalgia bait with clumsy emotional manipulation and blackmail doesn't mean it's a good story
Which sucks, because the story base in Dawntrail is actually a pretty good story, with good plot point ideas, and base... but it was all just done in a rushed, or idiotic way...
For example.. If they had spent half the story instead of babysitting Wuk, but instead having us run around Solution 9, and the last zone, helping Alexandrians, and getting to know them, and hooking us with them, BEFORE dropping the whole "oh btw, they're all fake, AND I'm going to bring total annihiliation to your world teehee" it would of been a way way better ball drop, and emotional rollercoaster, where as you're going to delete all their memories, you're actually emotionally invested to some degree, because you just spent the last 3 days getting to know them, and engaging with them.
From there, have us branch out, and help the other cultures get ready for the defense, and then bring the fight to them...
The whole Dawn Trail plot points had terrible setup.
And literally every single expansion has always been the cheesy "My friends are my power" type things anyway, so her entire thing being about wanting to protect her people and the peace they enjoy while still being someone young and not quite as seasoned as us or her father makes perfect sense and fits with everything else.
The literal only part of the story that has been an issue for me atm has just been the culmination of the start of the second half where the invasion starts, and the cause for the temporary stop. We were there, and we literally saved the universe. This should logically be easy for us to prevent, and i can get us not interfering because we just got there, and the part we did witness we were told to stay out of it as it wasnt our fight, but the rest of the scions should have been wiping the floor with them much easier. But thats realistically a minor critique, because they werent struggling against them either, and can be assumed that there were just too many in number to defend everyone.
I haven't even started DT.
I am starting over from scratch, like I always do every XPAC to see what they changed, plus i'm doing it on the new fem Hroth, which seems like quite a bit in ARR. Also the GFX upgrade is amazing, so much more clear and crisp animations, characters and environments. Oh, and i'm sure all the boys noticed, the boob physics got an upgrade with the GFX too. We can see them move even in heavy clothing nyao.
Regardless of all I said above.
I hear alot bout this 'Wuk' person. What about Princess Sara? I heard she is somewhat important too? Additionally, Alexandrians... this make me think of Alexander, and the few whom tried to summon it. Not to mention the stupid gobbies whom tried to control it. Is that the same or not? I am curious.
I don't care about spoilers. Mark it as a spoiler if you are willing to tell me.