On general the story looks good, I was hoping it will allow you to choose your name and how people refers to you, like most visual novels do, but I have no particular problem with that, I hope in the future you add a spanish translation. The art is good but the sound needs some calibrations, and that's all. Keep the great work!...

I have been playing your demo a bit and discovered some errors. There is at least one reference to 23rd Century events or tech, even though the game is set in the 22nd Century. It's spelled "anarchist", not 'anarquist' or however you wrote it. I got to the get-to-know Breakfast and chose to meet Captain Drali. The language switched from English to Portuguese. I can't read that so I stopped playing. The art style didn't impress me at first, but I soon got used to it. In my decisions I tried not to pick ...