< I think the beginning here is very nicely done, with only a few words reaching Jack > [Mr. Brickard] "it's a bit getting late" -> "it's getting a bit late" book: "are reporting a better results" -> "are reporting better results"; "even with ongoing crisis" -> "even with the ongoing crisis" book: "this excellent results" -> "these excellent results"; "you don't want to miss on it" -> "you don't want to miss out on it" book: "The King will once again hosting" -> "The King will once agai...

[Act II intro / border] "We're here in the Middleton Border." -> ".. at the Middleton border." "We're work" -> "We work" [Jack] "I'm curious why did you ... told that?" -> "I'm curious ... why did you tell him that?" "Finally, we're here. This is the Middleton." -> "This is Middleton!" "I ... don't expect it to be ... like this." -> "I ... didn't expect it to be ... like this." "What do you think?" -> "What do you mean?" "another farmland but" -> "farmland too, but" "People are migrating" -> "People migra...

Every time I interact with a book, it pops up the message that I read a total of one book: "Found 1 of 10 Books" The same happens for special characters, special doors. Shouldn't this increment?

I use slashes ( / ) for alternatives and { } for optional additions "Father was a physician and some sort of scientist" correctly sounds like he's dead; "Both of them are working" sounds like he isn't. "Father was always busy" vs "I can still help" is a similar issue 'saving up some money' could sound better than 'saving up some coins' (I did notice it's just called "coins" throughout the game) 'Grandmother ... visit him': him -> her "You don't have to tell that" -> "You don't have to tell ME th...

As you've noticed, I recently updated the game, which is way different from the previous version. The previous version was more of a visual novel compared to the latest build, which is mostly mini puzzles. This results in a complete overhaul of the achievements, which also removes previously gained achievements.   I sincerely apologize, and this mishap is totally on me. I should've been more mindful and at least tried to preserve my previous achievements. I should've released this build on a different app...