my P2 first map (don't be cruel)
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DigitalStone Dec 18, 2012 @ 9:00am 
Easy map, and i didn't had to use every part of the puzzle.
Still like thec oncept of a small confined environment.
Wolf bytes Dec 14, 2012 @ 3:42pm 
Nice job, not too bad for a first map. :)
-R!^ Dec 12, 2012 @ 8:11pm 
D;
ariel7590  [author] Dec 12, 2012 @ 1:56am 
Im glad there are people who enjoy my map.
When I'll have some time, I'll make another map.
Thank you for playing and critizing my map.
polarpal99 Dec 11, 2012 @ 10:50pm 
Congrats on going out on a limb to submit.
Practice makes perfect. (Feel free to beat mine up, too)
Fairly easy, but highly enjoyable. Keep 'em comin'!
arceus_the Dec 11, 2012 @ 7:27pm 
i had fun on this map(usually i just feel good that i was skilled enough to beat a map) thank you for spending your time to bring enjoyment to others!
msbellingham2011 Dec 10, 2012 @ 6:39pm 
It was a commendable first effort. And the faithplate wasnt completely useless..I figured out how to get rid of the laser pretty easily
Professor Spike Dec 9, 2012 @ 4:10am 
Easy,but yet fun map.Thought the aerial faithplate is useless...I stepped on it accidentally like 6 times and died...
LPChip Dec 9, 2012 @ 2:53am 
toncica is a horrible and cruel person too. :P

But yeah, we're friends. :) And ariel7590 I know from experience that good critisism is more useful than just having positive feedback. I did my best to not sound harsh or anything and I think that worked. :)
toncica Dec 9, 2012 @ 2:44am 
Cool. And I didn't mean that about LPChip. He is actually my friend.
ariel7590  [author] Dec 9, 2012 @ 2:23am 
toncica you remind me GLaDOS hahaXD
but you are right,LPChip decided to be honest with me and that's why his comment so helps me, don't worry you helped me too toncica.
Next time my level will be a lot less portable and more difficult, just need to think what to put in.
toncica Dec 8, 2012 @ 2:41pm 
LPChip is a horrible and cruel person! :D

He's also the only one to speak the truth. I'm sure after some time when you get more practice you will see that almost everything in this test was wrong. The previous display of dishonesty was shocking, or funny, I don't know.
LPChip Dec 8, 2012 @ 2:32pm 
This map has a pretty high rating for how it is designed... I'm sorry, but I didn't had much fun in playing this map. The map didn't look very appealing being just the default room with some elements in it, and most of the puzzle can be bypassed just by using your portal gun. My first level wasn't that good either, but this one... to be honest, its not that good. If the puzzle was solid it probably would've made a lot good. If it looked very attractive, it might've also made some good, but this really needs a lot of work to be fun. For me, being able to pass the level in under 30 seconds never gives me satisfaction.
relax Dec 8, 2012 @ 11:33am 
cheated it. muahahah ><
toncica Dec 8, 2012 @ 8:43am 
The regular editor does not support doors. You can use a 90 degree angled (glass) panel instead.
ariel7590  [author] Dec 8, 2012 @ 8:35am 
thank you everyone for you'r comments, you are awesome guys!
I'll learn from my mistakes, don't worry ;)
I want to ask you something:
I want to add another room to the test chamber after you solve this puzzle and open that door so it won't lead you to the elevator but to the another room, can somebody tell me how to do it?
BlinkyGamer™ Dec 8, 2012 @ 6:39am 
That's a good map. But I want to give you a hint: Put a bit more light in the map.
(i don't want to be cruel, ok?)
Ebes Aecrim Dec 8, 2012 @ 12:41am 
That's pretty good for your first test! ;)
KoreanoBH Dec 7, 2012 @ 7:37pm 
That's a good start. I guess you could just have been a little tougher than make 90% of the room "portal-friendly". Keep up the good work and let us know when you make a new map. :)
JackReacher Dec 7, 2012 @ 7:04pm 
I liked the map, but one thing that is wrong with it, it is too easy. You can put portals pretty much anywhere, thus making it úber easy.
Shiny Gallade Dec 7, 2012 @ 6:43pm 
decent map, but like everyone else said, needs a bit of work. i hope you check out my map too
-Smitty_Werbenjagermanjensen_#1- Dec 7, 2012 @ 6:12pm 
Not bad for a first try, a little easy to beat the natrual flow of the tes tho, think with portals. make it so there is only one, very difficult, way to solve the test,all in all very good indeed. 4/5
toncica Dec 7, 2012 @ 5:57pm 
I won't be cruel because I remember how horrible my first map was. ;)
But I can tell you making a puzzle takes a little more than putting elements into a room. Remember, everybody here has a portal gun. Here is my blind run of your map: http://youtu.be/VJs74r-OEUA
Jade BGE Dec 7, 2012 @ 1:36pm 
It's a fine map for a starter as you said. One bit of advice; If a player can get through the test without using everything you put in there then it has a loophole that needs to be filled. Be objective it helps to find those areas and portal surface placement is key. Nice job and I hope you'll play one of mine tool.