It's not close to being something that would be accepted by the developers but it's a start.

In it's current state, the textures appear very plain and muddy. And the overall design doesn't seem to conform to any of the games aesthetics.

Adding more detail to and diluting the red portion of the model might add more interest to it. Break up some of those red areas so that the model has better colour composition opportunities. If there's one thing that I've noticed about the Warframe community in regards to Tennogen skins and Deluxe skins alike, it's that people seem to hate skins that are hard to colour. If you'd like, I could help with with creating a markup for this. (Digital artist here.)