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Korzeam's Deathknight
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steffire3 Mar 29, 2019 @ 12:49am
Requested Spelling Corrections
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==Blood==
  • Boiling Blood:
    also (lose) 1% HP

  • Heart Strike:
    (hits) all enemies

  • Living Blood:
    skill is (active then) your critical hits ...
    The blood mass(es) (only last) 6 seconds (yet they) steal health (which is added) to (their) master.
    ... is permanent (yet clicking on this Skill again will end it.)

  • Blood Tornado:
    distant enemies. (A new blood missile is created per second when gaining odd numbered Ranks in this Skill.)
    ... also (lose) 2% HP
  • Tier II Bonus:
    stun (struck enemies) for

  • Precision Aura:
    (Chance to fumble attacks) is ...
    have (a greater) chance to
==Frost==
  • Arthas Blast:
    of Arthas (enters) you (thereby granting) you an icy attack on his behalf. (Struck) enemies get

  • Undead Hounds:
    damage increase(s) as ...
    They stay (for) 30 minutes or

  • Frostscythe:
    360 (degree) attack. (Enemies) are ...
    be (knocked back) and

  • Gargoyles:
    damage increase(s) as ...
    stay (for) 30 minutes ...
    they die (which) produces an

  • Pillar of Frost:
    they (radiate) an ...
    radius. (Within) that perimeter (the) enemies ...
    get a (critical chance bonus).

  • Glacial Advance:
    are (knocked back) and (frozen).

  • Sindragosa:
    effects. (Her) bite ...
    and (her) damage ...
    levels. (She) stays (for) 30 minutes or until (she) die(s) ...
    wakes up (her) brood.
  • Tier II Bonus:
    gains (a) bone spikes

  • Horns of Winter:
    the (strength) and
==Unholy==
  • Outbreak:
    a shield (then) 3 poison
  • Tier II Bonus:
    The radius (of this Skill) is

  • Death Grip:
    a shield (then) enemies

  • Dark Transformation:
    machines. (For) 15 seconds

  • Death and (D)ecay:
    a shield (then) enemies in the area (deal) 30%

  • Raise Dead:
    (Every enemy killed grants) a chance to ...
    seconds. (There's) also a ...
    Big Zombie () which

  • Murderous Efficiency:
    more chance(s) to (deal) critical hits (with increased) damage,
Last edited by steffire3; Mar 29, 2019 @ 12:54am
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Korzeam  [developer] Mar 31, 2019 @ 7:17am 
Thanks @steffire3 !
I've applied your corrections in my last update.
Tell me if you find other errors, and sorry for my bad english.
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steffire3 Mar 31, 2019 @ 6:38pm 
Originally posted by Korzeam:
Thanks @steffire3 !
I've applied your corrections in my last update.
Tell me if you find other errors, and sorry for my bad english.

I'm glad this was helpful!
Your English is good. It's just a few connective words that need to be used like:

"however it only lasts a few...",
"yet they can...",
and "which is added to..." in order to help players see that certain phrases are connected.

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I must credit this comment on the mod page here:

Originally posted by red velvet cake:
Sindragosa is a girl!

Which led me to this:

Originally posted by https://wow.gamepedia.com/Sindragosa:
Sindragosa, formerly the prime consort of Malygos up until her death during the War of the Ancients, was a mighty frost wyrm raised by the Lich King himself to serve as the queen of the Frostbrood. She was ultimately defeated by a group of adventurers in Icecrown Citadel.
Last edited by steffire3; Mar 31, 2019 @ 6:40pm
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