Hmmm

I bought it and it's an amazing syanadan, but the way it's seated on Warframe's back is weird and a bit far.

So... Grineer DO have a spine... lol

Well done! Though it hasn't much Orokin left in it. :0
Still, pretty damn cool.

I have to say, out of these syandana they are adding, this is my favorite by a HUGE margin. The others I think are distasteful, but beauty is in the eye of the beholder.

Im genuinely suprised people like a big jetpack block as syandana

Sure Rednexela :D

If you need any more lore suggestion, I'm glad to help!

Congrats!

Yay, this one got chosen! Thanks for all who supported my work :)

Congrats for winning at round 2

I really like this. like. i would buy it right this second.

However if i had to give one constructive critisism, its that maybe the 'head' of it is a little... big? like again, i love everything about this, but if that was sized down a little bit i think i would love it even more.

I don't know on which warframe I'd put this, but it looks awesome

TENNOUTTATEN

I would buy it, immediately. I'd buy it for extra.

This is amazing!

Tyl Regor: You sneaky, pinching, lizards! You do NOT have authorization to wear this boon of my tubemen, the very same tubemen you slew! These were refined, perfected, after we took the base design from those greedy milkheads by my own children! How dare you tarnish this symbol with your slimy, grabbing, hands! YOU... WILL... REGRET THIS!

One more suggestion: Why not try adding one of those energy prongs to the bottom tip of the syandana? Seems like it'll... "complete" the syandana IMO. Still, I love it.

but the story is 10/10

-100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10

eaw.. not going on my like vote

i like it but maybe the cirle that is attatched to the body was a different shape :)

Looks very grineer-y. I love it.

I like very much but it's better to circle the color was white

sure @ScorpyX, I'll upload the model in sketchfab soon

looks nice - but i want video "3d model turntable" to see it from all angles

god-like...

Nice.. loooove grineer stuff.. dont know why people are complaining about the glowy parts.. do they recall the Sydon, or even the Kohm? Not all "glowy things" are corpus / orokin only.. it depends upon how it is done...looks more like metal coils conducting heat to me.. I think some more loose / faulty wiring to fill the empty space at the bottom would be something interesting to consider (or whether you decide to fill the gap with something more orokin or corpus-like)

Maybe having a heat-wave effect would look pretty dope too

TBH though.. I'm having a hard time seeing the corpus (cold / energy / circuitry) or orokin (clean / zen / extravagant) aspects.. or perhaps I'm misunderstanding how they were incorporated into this piece

Ohohohoho wow . This, this is a HUGE improvement over the old concept, and that was already a solid design in the first place. You, good sir, have create a guaranteed shoo-in.

@The.Maverick.Mercenary The description says it is a fusion of Orokin, Corpus, and Grineer tech/design. Next time, try to READ before you comment.

I like it, but it's a bit much. It has the grineer look but grineer usually are more mechanical but this has those energy feather things. Also, the feather things are to repetitive as they go down. Maybe change the size? But the feather don't fit the grineer look anyways, maybe they should be made of like a metal material and not so thin where they connect to the middle cord. So finally, in my opinion, I think this would need too much work done on it to make it into the game. Not trying to offend anyone, everyone is entitled to their opinion.

The weird little wing things don't look very good in my opinion, they seem like, too 2D for the rest of it

If this doesn't get in game then I'm done.

It is so Niceee . I really want this in game

This is beautiful, awesome concept too.

Looks brilliant. I really want this ingame.

Looks like a dream catcher. Nice Job 10/10 ;)

Nice concept!

The part where it connects the the back is good, but its not something I would use.

Personal taste, no fish spine please. And it glows too much, although the upper section is quite good.

well.. that's fine :D

Keep up the good work -Lotus

I think it won't receive flowy, smoth cloth physics because of how the glowy meshes are arranged. If it would receive smooth cloth physics, all the glowy stuff would sag.
I suggest that this have a solid, clunky, chain like physics

I hope this syandana will receive a cloth physics instead of clunky physics (like yamako or such)

*you know what I'm referencing, do you? ;-)

changed lore, thanks to redditor MyIGNis-Rednexela for the awesome lore suggestion

An embodiment of history, I have YES'd this.
Would like to see complimentary armour parts to embody the 'New Era' feel this [Cloak] has, or at least a few skins here and there.

This is great (y)
5/7 would buy (seriously.)

this is different, and has a nice backstory

I like the idea of using different factions into a single item.

I think I'd feel dangerous wearing this syandana. But I totally dig the vibe of this, energy colors and neons would be sweet kudos on the design work

Nice.. good work

I think this is the first time i've seen a "Clean" look to a Grineer based item. Most of the time they're filled with a lot of really gross torsions and lines. This? This is really good.

Admittedly, it looks like something based off of the Grineer Galleon's exterior. It's not a bad thing but i'll say its pretty different. I would maybe suggest giving something to those "fins" hanging off the tail-piece, making it look like they're attached more solidly rather than just acting as floating holograms. either way, you've got my vote.

if this one is not accepted imma (╯°□°）╯︵ ┻━┻) for sure . Long live