[SFM Best Short 2013] Pyro's Axe Adventure
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XelUnknown 2013年11月24日 17時37分 
Best of luck with your next try.
Braccus 2013年11月23日 13時28分 
Voted HELL NO
Blk_Mage_Ctype 2013年11月23日 12時05分 
Not bad for a first try, but your animation needs work. I couldn't even understand what happened at the end.. (I'm assuming that Pyro threw his Axe at the Sniper, but without the animation to show it, I honestly don't know.) Brush up on your animation and come back next year.
Phenix8fr [FR] 2013年11月23日 6時42分 
i undestand nothing ....
bipper 2013年11月21日 15時24分 
Sorry but...It's a no from me.
PKblaze 2013年11月20日 14時53分 
You need to work on your animations as it takes away from the pacing.
Omega 2013年11月20日 14時35分 
Needs work. Major Major work. Review in editing more.
Danksama 2013年11月20日 11時59分 
Not worth an upvote, even if it is your first video. Another guy's second ever video which was entered for this was more impressive. Practice some more, you'll get it.
(M3) spd12 2013年11月20日 9時05分 
As a first SFM, I can see the beginnings of something heartwarming. As it is when judged for a Saxxy, though, there are many technical issues (for one, we never see Pyro throw the axe in the end), and the use of stock animations kind of erodes much of the potential personality. I'm sure you'll make something pretty cool by next year if you stick with it, though.
Scoobs 2013年11月20日 3時45分 
What the hell?