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[AI] AI has done it again.
My song "No sodium" that I wrote completely by myself with some minimal help from AI

Yo yo let me kick it of like this
I really love subway, the meatballs are epic
Meatballs for daddy, chicken for mommy
My sister got the egg white and a side of tomato
Cucumbers, pickles, and jalapeños
It’s healthy and it’s not gonna make me go yo-yo

I’m at the top of my game like Michael Jackson
I’m like a beast with a machete like Jason Vorhees
I’m so nice I’m not a knife I’m a spoon
I don’t even need a knife I’m so good with the spoon
I’m like the jester in Gondor but I just came through
I’m like a baker in Dothraki and you know I’m just like I do
But not for me it’s for you

Here's your share, a sub with some cheese
Bologna, salami, turkey, roast beef, no pepperoni or pesto
Just cause I’m eating this don’t mean I can touch your cheese
If I want cheese I’ll pay extra
Here’s a sandwich with your name, it’s a turkey sub with pepper jack cheese
Some mayonnaise if you want that I guess
And I’m a big guy I’m like a lumberjack
So if it’s cold outside you’ll need a parka
Cause I’m like a big dude in a house with a fire
I’m cooking like the best of ‘em and they’re jealous of the spice
They say I got the heat because I’m like a chef in China

Again, can you believe AI has come as far as to write lyrics like this?

https://suno.com/song/965123a9-7651-4541-95fd-139d959427d2
Last edited by peanut butter complexion; Oct 1, 2024 @ 9:03am
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Originally posted by NoRain :( 🗕 🗗 🗙:
You must think about me a lot to dedicate an account, and a portion of your life solely to me

https://steamcommunity.com/discussions/forum/12/4843148932556250438/
Are you saying you're AI or whats the implication here bro
Originally posted by Morkonan:
Originally posted by SIim Shadow:
Not everyone can understand poetry. If you are here to troll it's the wrong place.

I'm not trolling.

You put it up, I'm giving feedback. You don't have to like it and I don't have to praise you for it, right? Right.

You called it a "song."

Understanding the difference between a "song" and "poetry" would be a good start for you.
It's more than just a song and it takes understanding to realize that
Originally posted by SIim Shadow:
Originally posted by Morkonan:

I'm not trolling.

You put it up, I'm giving feedback. You don't have to like it and I don't have to praise you for it, right? Right.

You called it a "song."

Understanding the difference between a "song" and "poetry" would be a good start for you.
It's more than just a song and it takes understanding to realize that
It's just out put from a machine after a simple prompt.
Originally posted by NoRain :( 🗕 🗗 🗙:
You must think about me a lot to dedicate an account, and a portion of your life solely to me

https://steamcommunity.com/discussions/forum/12/4843148932556250438/
While copying is going on, it doesn't help prove that when the post you linked was made 3 hours after this one.
Vince ✟ Oct 1, 2024 @ 3:24pm 
I read that as "with some mineral help"
Hooch Oct 1, 2024 @ 3:35pm 
Suno is a lot of fun, and very impressive. I don't think the song you created/linked to is all that impressive though as it lacks consistent cadence, odd phrasing, and sometimes, out of place lyrics.

The creativity that can be done with Suno is pretty amazing, I agree with you there. But I bet you can create something a lot more refined/catchy.
Originally posted by SIim Shadow:
My song "No sodium" that I wrote completely by myself with some minimal help from AI

Yo yo let me kick it of like this
I really love subway, the meatballs are epic
Meatballs for daddy, chicken for mommy
My sister got the egg white and a side of tomato
Cucumbers, pickles, and jalapeños
It’s healthy and it’s not gonna make me go yo-yo

I’m at the top of my game like Michael Jackson
I’m like a beast with a machete like Jason Vorhees
I’m so nice I’m not a knife I’m a spoon
I don’t even need a knife I’m so good with the spoon
I’m like the jester in Gondor but I just came through
I’m like a baker in Dothraki and you know I’m just like I do
But not for me it’s for you

Here's your share, a sub with some cheese
Bologna, salami, turkey, roast beef, no pepperoni or pesto
Just cause I’m eating this don’t mean I can touch your cheese
If I want cheese I’ll pay extra
Here’s a sandwich with your name, it’s a turkey sub with pepper jack cheese
Some mayonnaise if you want that I guess
And I’m a big guy I’m like a lumberjack
So if it’s cold outside you’ll need a parka
Cause I’m like a big dude in a house with a fire
I’m cooking like the best of ‘em and they’re jealous of the spice
They say I got the heat because I’m like a chef in China

Again, can you believe AI has come as far as to write lyrics like this?

https://suno.com/song/965123a9-7651-4541-95fd-139d959427d2

That rhyme was hollow with no flow to follow.
Morkonan Oct 1, 2024 @ 3:39pm 
Originally posted by SIim Shadow:
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It's more than just a song and it takes understanding to realize that

It's nonsense.

If it's comedy, lampooning a bad choice of subject matter, that's OK. If it's serious... It's nonsense.

Because it lacks its own creative merit, you have to pull out names like Jason Vorhees and the Dothraki to do what your words should have already been able to do?

Do you think that because you used Michael Jackson's name in your text that you are now as talented as Michael Jackson was?

It takes more to create a "song" or even "poetry" than just stringing words together.


But, hey - If you get a publisher to buy it or get your dream contract from a big label because of it, you'll be happy that I was wrong. So, there's that.
Hooch Oct 1, 2024 @ 4:25pm 
Your song re-imagined (changed lyrics) as 80's Southern Rock:

https://suno.com/song/5d7f161b-fb36-4d85-8770-ff1e4ebf9e54

Edgy New Wave Rock:

https://suno.com/song/7b4eb386-e026-4a6d-8814-1b981e0e29e4
R-S!N Oct 1, 2024 @ 5:00pm 
yup I can believe it.
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Date Posted: Oct 1, 2024 @ 8:57am
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