is this rap good or nah?

[Yubel]

so a good friend of mine whos 11 posted a good rap on soundcloud and my friends said it was cringy and bad i liked it so i decicided to let you all decide
https://soundcloud.com/ashes-blaze/life-1

[peppermint hollows]

We're clearly looking at the next eminem...

I'm kidding

[Yubel]

Originally posted by StrawberryPi π:

We're clearly looking at the next eminem...

I'm kidding

wanna joke about this guys dream aight not like this guy trys his hardest and still gets hated on by everyone around him thats the reason i wanted ppl here to think about it not biased friends

[jed]

To be blunt, I got through 10 seconds of it. But, I shouldn't give my opinion since I don't like rap in the first place. Also, to be rap you have to say ♥♥♥♥ every other line. Kidding

[Soda ポップ！]

No. He's not even trying.

[shoopy]

The lyrics are ok but the actual rapping isn't. Way too much stuttering and stumbling and not enough style or presence.

[😼Studio Cat😼]

Originally posted by ardiel:

The lyrics are ok but the actual rapping isn't. Way too much stuttering and stumbling and not enough style or presence.

That is not a requirement of Radio Rap. Just good rap. We have a local station here that I honestly can't tell the rapping commercials for local bottle shops and convenience stores from the music being played.

Originally posted by ardiel:

The lyrics are ok but the actual rapping isn't. Way too much stuttering and stumbling and not enough style or presence.

A fair assessment. You need practice and lots of it. It has to flow out of you, weaving it's own lyrical rhythm. It needs a lot more presence, and you need to own it. This kind of sounds like you are scared the mic it going to decide to suddenly slap you.

[󠀡󠀡󠀡󠀡]

Originally posted by Kun:

so a good friend of mine whos 11 posted a good rap on soundcloud and my friends said it was cringy and bad i liked it so i decicided to let you all decide
https://soundcloud.com/ashes-blaze/life-1

he say this kids 11 but he sounds a 16 year old with a lisp trying to get men.

[Sarge]

The only thing i can rap is a taco

[I will execute you]

It needs some old school beats in it or it just aint rap.

[Apostulator]

https://youtu.be/PobrSpMwKk4

[76109108007942031]

Originally posted by Kun:

Originally posted by StrawberryPi π:

We're clearly looking at the next eminem...

I'm kidding

wanna joke about this guys dream aight not like this guy trys his hardest and still gets hated on by everyone around him thats the reason i wanted ppl here to think about it not biased friends

You said you posted it to let everyone decide, don't say that and complain when people make a decision you don't like.

[Vuitton Vampire]

what does an 11 year old know about life? Seriously, pretty bad.

[Beaker]

Originally posted by Ugly:

what does an 11 year old know about life? Seriously, pretty bad.

Slim to none

[[SM]Devilsix]

Idk he sounded like he was faded a little. Though he sounds like he has a very low end mic too much background noise for me to really hear anything, though the one thing that popped out to me was that he sounded faded. You should advise your friend to use music that fits his taste like slower type beats. And he needs to talk about things that are real to him like this dude https://soundcloud.com/davon_evans/drive and here is the instrumental https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XbqmjsHasow can even get some with a chorus. I just listened to his second song I can't type the name on here cause it is about women who sales their bodies, but anyways if this kid is 11 he sure does cuss so much on that song that his momma should just smack his mouth.