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Im not trying to be mean but it doesnt jump out at me and unless youre really attractive, bio is gonna have to carry a bit more.
OR you could go test drive an expensive exotic car then pull over and take a photo of you next to the car. Does nothing for me personally but there are a lot of girls who hook up with guys like that.
"I am a 34-year-old guy with nerdy interests. I like to hang out at home playing video games. I have social anxiety however I'm not rude so if someone else starts a conversation I can jump in. I'm a generally considerate person so I don't blast loud music at 1 a.m. I'm a casual drinker/social, no addictions. I work at Thermo-Fisher Scientific in Allentown, PA packaging pharmaceutical drugs. Outside of gaming I like to jump in the pool and am open to "less intense" sports like golf or something like biking. Football, basketball... I'm not into those things. I'm pretty tech-savvy so I can help you with computer problems. Generally I'm a nice, mellow guy."
You're pretty handy with a marker. Teacher irl?
Tone down the part about social anxiety, use the word “shy” instead, or leave it out entirely
Instead of saying you sit at home playing games alot (boring), why not mention something awesome you did in the past or are very proud of
Being nice is not something you say, it’s something you show. In the chats and on dates. Saying “I’m nice and considerate” only makes people suspicious of your true intentions
Don’t mention where you work
End with a joke or a witty remark about something you said earlier on
Try to keep it under 30 words. It’s only a short description, not an auto-biography
Yes, actually. Still barely readable, but its a start. Removes a lot of the negative talking points.
I'm a casual drinker/social.
I work packaging pharmaceutical drugs.
Outside of gaming I like to jump in the pool and am open to sports like golf or biking.
I'm pretty tech-savvy.
Generally I'm a mellow guy."
That should help; less is more. Still needs work. Refrain from negativity or too much information, but dont swing the other way and toot your own horn.
I'm a casual drinker and I work in the science field. I'm pretty tech-savvy, if I do say so myself. Care to figure out how? No time to explain. Just get in the car and let me take you on a wild ride."
There. Fixed. It shows your nerdy side, your hobbies, an arrogant yet playful side - confidence - and a bit of tongue in cheek player talk that usually comes from BBQ uncles or from memes.
Dating apps ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ sucks but that's the only way for heavy introverts - especially males - to get into a relationship.
in my view its about making us curious, the less u tell us the better, add some info, just keep it at a minimum, whats the point of a date if they already know everything before the date.. make us smile, silly joke works.. confidence, insecurity is a turn off.. also, those pickup lines u find and hear, yea those.. dont do those..
also it depends on what ur looking for, relationship or one night? if one night, be naughty af..
keep in mind tho.. every woman is different, so u cant make one text that works on everyone, know what u want first..
An extremely beautiful and captivating one at that above me