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R00iValk 25. jan. 2017 kl. 10:38
Synonym for "And I'm ♥♥♥♥ing sick of it"
Really, it's an English Essay about Death being tired about transporting souls, I have such a dramatic build up, but I'm not allowed to swear.

The line is:

I am but a messenger.
And I’m ♥♥♥♥ing sick of it


Any alternatives for "And I'm ♥♥♥♥ing sick of it?"

EDIT: OKAY, I ♥♥♥♥ING GOT IT.

Death will drop the mic at the very end, saying ,"That's it. I'm done with this. I leave this responsibility to the locusts. They may do as they please." supplied by Quint the House Gecko

Now, time to write a monologue.
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R00iValk 25. jan. 2017 kl. 10:50 
Oprindeligt skrevet af ShadowPuglia:
Oprindeligt skrevet af R00iValk:
Catch 22...

Well, with yours, the impact is gone, but it makes it more sorrowful, but my approach is more comedic in a sense. I really like this one, though :3
Aight lol. I would ask if you can have the swear word as I think it would make the build up MUCH better.
I hate how I have to adjust the entire 142 word (that's right, 142 ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ words) build up just because I can't use one silly little word...
R00iValk 25. jan. 2017 kl. 10:50 
Oprindeligt skrevet af moistly harmless:
AND I COULD MURDER A CURRY
I have so many questions right now.
Vince ✟ 25. jan. 2017 kl. 10:53 
Oprindeligt skrevet af ShadowPuglia:
Oprindeligt skrevet af Vince:
You execrate it
Are you high? XD

Not since around 86'

Not excrete.. execrate.

Define execrate: to dislike and criticize (someone or something) very strongly
Sidst redigeret af Vince ✟; 25. jan. 2017 kl. 10:58
R00iValk 25. jan. 2017 kl. 10:55 
Oprindeligt skrevet af Vince:
Oprindeligt skrevet af ShadowPuglia:
Are you high? XD

Not excrete.. execrate.

Define execrate: to dislike and criticize (someone or something) very strongly — execrate in a sentence.
Only after my 3rd reading did I notice you said "execrate" and not "excrete", I was so befuddled by the suggestion.
Vince ✟ 25. jan. 2017 kl. 10:56 
Yea its funny how the brain likes to assume patterns it knows most over making new ones.
tmwfte 25. jan. 2017 kl. 10:59 
Bloody cheese doodles.
mellow 25. jan. 2017 kl. 11:00 
'i had enough' 'im done with this'
lol that one troll loc guy calling himself exe-create

Anyway, I think the impact of this sort of wording really depends a lot on the context. That's why "precision F strike" is a trope. If you're using mostly calm formal language otherwise and you suddenly switch to even mild slang, the tone change is noticeable. On the other hand, if the rest of the passage is filled with swearwords, one more doesn't feel like much at all.

How does Death talk, other than this? Give some examples of normal Death talking.

(that sentence sounded weird haha)

Other suggestions:
"I've had it up to here."
"I'm not taking it anymore."
"The buck stops here."
"No. No more."
"That's it. I'm out."
"This is the end of the line."
"I don't care."
"That's it. I'm done with this. I leave this responsibility to the locusts. They may do as they please."
Sidst redigeret af Quint the Alligator Snapper; 25. jan. 2017 kl. 11:03
novasunshine 25. jan. 2017 kl. 11:01 
Look for synonyms until you find the strongest one.
Add a hyperbole to it to spice it up.
tmwfte 25. jan. 2017 kl. 11:02 
Steaming pile of fart pebbles.
R00iValk 25. jan. 2017 kl. 11:02 
Oprindeligt skrevet af Quint the House Gecko:
lol that one troll loc guy calling himself exe-create

Anyway, I think the impact of this sort of wording really depends a lot on the context. That's why "precision F strike" is a trope. If you're using mostly calm formal language otherwise and you suddenly switch to even mild slang, the tone change is noticeable. On the other hand, if the rest of the passage is filled with swearwords, one more doesn't feel like much at all.

How does Death talk, other than this? Give some examples of normal Death talking.

(that sentence sounded weird haha)
For reference, here's the entire piece I wrote (please note I'm not set up for writing Essays, I'm more of an acting bloke)

This job is going to kill me.
Or, at least kill the following 37 people who just happened to be in Café Ri at exactly 7:31.
I am who you call Death. I’m the last thing whom you see just before you die. I simply Reap, I do not Sow. I do not plant, I simply harvest.
I do not give, I simply take.
Being a Reaper means you take the Souls of the Living and transport it to the Isle of the Dead. What lies beyond? I do not know.
I am but a messenger.
And I’m ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ sick of it.
blue 25. jan. 2017 kl. 11:03 
i feel like if ur going comedic it doesn't make sense for building up drama

im not sure how ur death character acts, but death in my mind wouldn't use such new fangled words like ♥♥♥♥, or be very comedic
FWIW, "transport them".

Also, if that's all you wrote?

How about just "I'm sick of it."?

If you mic-drop there, that by itself leaves an impact.

For more impact, put the other text into a paragraph, then make this line a new paragraph.
Sidst redigeret af Quint the Alligator Snapper; 25. jan. 2017 kl. 11:05
R00iValk 25. jan. 2017 kl. 11:06 
Oprindeligt skrevet af A Mango ᵈᵒᵍ gril:
i feel like if ur going comedic it doesn't make sense for building up drama

im not sure how ur death character acts, but death in my mind wouldn't use such new fangled words like ♥♥♥♥, or be very comedic
Well,in my little Essay, Death is very serious in his ways, he's formal, he's clean, he's responsbile.

At least that's what I'd like you to think.

I want him to cuss to throw you off, it makes him in some odd way relatable.
novasunshine 25. jan. 2017 kl. 11:08 
Oprindeligt skrevet af R00iValk:
Oprindeligt skrevet af Quint the House Gecko:
lol that one troll loc guy calling himself exe-create

Anyway, I think the impact of this sort of wording really depends a lot on the context. That's why "precision F strike" is a trope. If you're using mostly calm formal language otherwise and you suddenly switch to even mild slang, the tone change is noticeable. On the other hand, if the rest of the passage is filled with swearwords, one more doesn't feel like much at all.

How does Death talk, other than this? Give some examples of normal Death talking.

(that sentence sounded weird haha)
For reference, here's the entire piece I wrote (please note I'm not set up for writing Essays, I'm more of an acting bloke)

This job is going to kill me.
Or, at least kill the following 37 people who just happened to be in Café Ri at exactly 7:31.
I am who you call Death. I’m the last thing whom you see just before you die. I simply Reap, I do not Sow. I do not plant, I simply harvest.
I do not give, I simply take.
Being a Reaper means you take the Souls of the Living and transport it to the Isle of the Dead. What lies beyond? I do not know.
I am but a messenger.
And I’m ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ sick of it.
And I abhor every moment of my life for it.
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