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I'm fed up, I have had just about enough of, I can't take it anymore. Can you use a word like bloody or flipping to add the impact back in?
I like both, but Jesse is right, the impact of it all is... poof, gone.
Thanks :D
If you have such a dramatic build up, it'll be obvious without the swear. If it doesn't work without the swear, you don't have the build up. ;)
Dammit
But everyday my heart aches to destory the chains that pin me down.
Idk it's not great, maybe ask if you can use the word because I feel like now you thought of this really powerfull line anything else will always be overshadowed.
I don't like how swear words are shunned, they are the best way to show extreme emotion, however I guess because it's shunned it gains it's "power" as a word.
Hide it, then.
"I've felt the turn of the screw. You guys, I'm going home!"
Well, with yours, the impact is gone, but it makes it more sorrowful, but my approach is more comedic in a sense. I really like this one, though :3
You detest it
You loathe it
You despise it
You execrate it
You curse it
You can go from there.