Synonym for "And I'm ♥♥♥♥ing sick of it"
Really, it's an English Essay about Death being tired about transporting souls, I have such a dramatic build up, but I'm not allowed to swear.

The line is:

I am but a messenger.
And I’m ♥♥♥♥ing sick of it


Any alternatives for "And I'm ♥♥♥♥ing sick of it?"

EDIT: OKAY, I ♥♥♥♥ING GOT IT.

Death will drop the mic at the very end, saying ,"That's it. I'm done with this. I leave this responsibility to the locusts. They may do as they please." supplied by Quint the House Gecko

Now, time to write a monologue.
Viimeisin muokkaaja on R00iValk; 25.1.2017 klo 11.50
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HEART 25.1.2017 klo 10.39 
And I grow weary of xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Takes alot of the impact away to be fair but you could use...

I'm fed up, I have had just about enough of, I can't take it anymore. Can you use a word like bloody or flipping to add the impact back in?
Viimeisin muokkaaja on Steve-Hen; 25.1.2017 klo 10.41
Silversun ✴ Moon 0430 lähetti viestin:
And I grow weary of xxxxxxxxxxxxx


Jesse lähetti viestin:
Takes alot of the impact away to be fair but you could use...

I'm fed up, I have had just about enough of, I can't take it anymore.
I like both, but Jesse is right, the impact of it all is... poof, gone.

Thanks :D
"Screw you guys, I'm going home."
"And I'm sick of it"

If you have such a dramatic build up, it'll be obvious without the swear. If it doesn't work without the swear, you don't have the build up. ;)
tmwfte lähetti viestin:
"Screw you guys, I'm going home."
I can't even say Screw.

Dammit
I am but a messenger.
But everyday my heart aches to destory the chains that pin me down.

Idk it's not great, maybe ask if you can use the word because I feel like now you thought of this really powerfull line anything else will always be overshadowed.
I don't like how swear words are shunned, they are the best way to show extreme emotion, however I guess because it's shunned it gains it's "power" as a word.
R00iValk lähetti viestin:
tmwfte lähetti viestin:
"Screw you guys, I'm going home."
I can't even say Screw.

Dammit

Hide it, then.

"I've felt the turn of the screw. You guys, I'm going home!"
ShadowPuglia lähetti viestin:
I am but a messenger.
But everyday my heart aches to destory the chains that pin me down.

Idk it's not great, maybe ask if you can use the word because I feel like now you thought of this really powerfull line anything else will always be overshadowed.
I don't like how swear words are shunned, they are the best way to show extreme emotion, however I guess because it's shunned it gains it's "power" as a word.
Catch 22...

Well, with yours, the impact is gone, but it makes it more sorrowful, but my approach is more comedic in a sense. I really like this one, though :3
"And I grow weary"
I grew abhoring it more. It's ripping and tearing me.
Viimeisin muokkaaja on novasunshine; 25.1.2017 klo 10.46
R00iValk lähetti viestin:
ShadowPuglia lähetti viestin:
I am but a messenger.
But everyday my heart aches to destory the chains that pin me down.

Idk it's not great, maybe ask if you can use the word because I feel like now you thought of this really powerfull line anything else will always be overshadowed.
I don't like how swear words are shunned, they are the best way to show extreme emotion, however I guess because it's shunned it gains it's "power" as a word.
Catch 22...

Well, with yours, the impact is gone, but it makes it more sorrowful, but my approach is more comedic in a sense. I really like this one, though :3
Aight lol. I would ask if you can have the swear word as I think it would make the build up MUCH better.
You abhor it
You detest it
You loathe it
You despise it
You execrate it
You curse it

You can go from there.
Viimeisin muokkaaja on Vince ✟; 25.1.2017 klo 10.50
AND I COULD MURDER A CURRY
Vince lähetti viestin:
You execrate it
Are you high? XD
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