Recommended CHANGES IN ENGLISH TRANSLATION

[ChristopherNuin]

I will gather here my recommended changes in English translation for the game, as well as some ideas regarding UI or gameplay. Some bigger parts may appear separately as comments.

Main Menu:
play = Play

Options Menu:
Control = Controls

Play Menu:
Continue Game = Continue

Advice: Buttons background is to narrow to contain ‘Continue Game’ and ‘Bloody Palace’, it should be made wider.

Play Modes descriptions:
Easy = Recommended for players who have never played action games with intense combat.
Normal = Recommended for players who have played Souls-like action games.
Hard = Recommended for veteran players who have played games like Ninja Gaiden or Yakuza.

Settings Menu:
Cam sensibility = Camera Sensitivity
Background voice = Background Voice
DialogVolume = Dialogue Volume
brightness = Brightness

Advice: I recommend making more space between option names and the sliders. Also the background could be changed into something more high quality or removed.
Advice: Add slider for Music Volume.

Control Menu:
Name = Action
keyboard = Keyboard
Joystick = Gamepad
Right Joystick = Right Stick
Left Joystick = Left Stick
Press Enter to setting Keyboard. Or (…) = Press enter to change Keyboard layout. Press A button to change Gamepad layout.

Advice:There should be Back button next to Reset button.

Clear Data pop-up:
Clear all game data ! Are you Sure? = All game data will be lost! Do you want to proceed?

Tips:
Advice: Font used in English language should be changed. Current font is very hard to read.
Advice: Move Tip bar from center to bottom of the screen, remove gray background and keep it black, then move white loading animation from right bottom corner to the center of the screen.

Pause Menu:
Bloody Spell - Bloody Spells
weapon skill - Weapon Skills
equipment - Equipment
State = Hero Statistics
Achievement = Achievements
item = Inventory
collection = Knowledge

Advice: The female outfit/skin DLC should be implemented in the game as separate playable character - the main hero's sister. So the story could be played in both ways, brother is saving his sister or sister is saving her brother.

State menu:
Property = Statistics
Passive effect = Passive Effects

Achievements menu:
free research = Free Roam
fight system = Combat
equipment and spell = Equipment and Spells
easter eggs = Easter Eggs

Advice: There is some issue with upper buttons, where ‘fight system button’ area is partly covered by ‘equipment and spell button’ area. Those buttons should be adjusted.

Free research achievements:
1. Destroy 250 items in scene = Destroy 250 destructible objects.
2. Investigate for 10 times = Investigate 10 times.
4. Collect 10 torn Page of the Soul Pact = Collect 10 Torn Pages of the Soul Pact.
5. Fall into the pit for 5 times in a row = In the Prison dungeon fall into the pit 5 times in a row.

Fight system achievements:
1. Succeed to evade enemy attack for 20 times in a row = Successfuly evade icoming attacks 20 times.
3. Succeed to counterattack enemy for 20 times = Successfuly counterattack attacking enemies 20 times.
4. Succeed to counterattack enemy with darts for 20 times = Successfully counterattack attacking enemies with darts 20 times.
11. Pass the difficult mode = Finish the game on Hard difficulty.
12 - 15. Pass blood palace level # = Finish level # of the Bloody Palace.

Equipment and spell achievements:
1. Dressed all the equipment of sect = Wear all four parts of the attire of the Sect.
2. Unlock all Bloody Spell = Unlock all Bloody Spells.
3. Unlock all spell of Blade = Unlock all Blade Skills.
4. Unlock all spell of Spearstick = Unlock all Spearstick Skills.
5. Master of Great sword = Master of Great Sword
5. Unlock all spell of Great sword = Unlock all Great Sword Skills.
6. Unlock all spell of Knuckles = Unlock all Knuckles Skills.

Weapon skills menu:
Advice: Change font in 'weapon spells menu' used for spells names. Current font is hard to read.
Advice: After buying a skill there is no indicator nor icon showing that we own that skill. It would be nice to see it there.

Interactions:
Hold down RT to pick up = RT - pick up
Hold down RT to end the enemy = RT - assassinate
(using ladder) RT = RT - use ladder
(opening doors and chests) RT = RT - open
(altar) RT = RT - interact
(unlocking chest) Unlocked successfully! = Chest unlocked!

Sacrifice altar pop-up:
Forget random Bloody Spell, and temporarily raise your (stat) by # - # points.

Items menu:
Count = Quantity

Description of 'Torn Page of the Soul Pact':
"Faded, defiled page that illustrates (...)" = "Faded, defiled page that illustrates a scene, most likely a ritual. The outside world is rumored to be a realm of spirituality, and so, using a living sacrifice is required for completing the ritual. Pictures and text on the torn pages are supposed to depict its stages."

Description of 'Blood Essence':
"Essence of blood, can only be sensed (...)" = "Essence of blood that can only be sensed and utilised by the Assassin Clan, who worship blood as totem and use it as their source of power. Members of the Assassin Clan are able to absorb Blood Essence from fallen enemies to enhance themselves with it."

Description of 'Broken Soul Stela':
Broken Soul Stela = Cracked Soul Stele
"A stone tablet carved with hieroglyph (...)" = "A stone tabled carved with hieroglyphs. Its surface is covered with sprawling fissures through which a melancholic sapphire gleam can be seen. According to the old legend, to wake up Chaos who had been sealed during the Millennial War, Succubus concluded an agreement with him to sacrifice humans and to build stone tablets as this, so they would serve as portals between two realms."

Tutorial dialogue with Faceless:
F: "Here is the illusion of fantasy (...)" = "I am Faceless, your ancestor. I created and guard this place made of illusions."
F: "The soul of the ancestors told me (...)" = "Souls of your ancestors told me that your Clan was swarmed by the Void Legion, and so I managed to save you."
Y: "Wher's Li,my sister?" = "Where is my sister? Where is Li?"
F: "She was taken away by (...)" = "She was abducted by the Void Legion. I was unable to save her, I came too late."
Y: "Damn...ah!" = "Damn it! ... Argh!"
F: "Don't worry, your injury (...)" = "Don't worry, your wound is not serious. Now, our priority is to regain your lost fighting skills."
F: "Come on, let's start from the beginning." = "Let us start from the beginning."
F: "First pick up the weapon and equip your weapon." = "First, pick up the weapon and equip it."
F: "Press the X key continuously (...)" = "Press X button repeatedly to perform series of light attacks."
F: "Very good, then press Y key continuously to use the heavy attack." = "Very good. Now, press Y button repeatedly to perform series of heavy attacks."
F: "Yes, your fighting consciousness (...)" = That's it. Your fighting senses are gradually awakening. Press B button to throw a knife."
F: "To be a warrior of Netherland (...) = "To become a warrior of Netherland you need to master more skills."
F: "In addition to offense (...) = "There are many additional ways that can make you invincible."
F: "To evade attacks (...) = "You can jump to evade incoming attacks or to cross over obstacles. Press A button to perform a jump."
F: "Dodge is the most effective (...) = "Dodging is the most effective technique used to evade incoming attack. Try to dodge by pressing LT button."
F: "Press Right Joystick to lock the enemy and kill him." = "Press R3 to lock on the enemy, then kill him."
F: "When the number of enemies (...) = "If there are more than one enemy in the vicinity, you can use stealth to deal with them."
F: "Walking will not alarm (...)" = "Walking will not alarm patrolling enemies. Slowly approach chosen enemy from behind to assassinate them."
F: "Push the left stick to walk (...)" = "Gently tilt the left stick to slowly walk towards the enemy, then press RT button to perform assassination."
F: "Well done! You have the potential (...)" = "Excellent work! You have the potential to become the best assassin of the Assassin Clan."
F: "Your martial arts talent is amazing (...)" = "Your natural talent for martial arts is amazing, to recall all your fighting skills in such a short time."
Y: "Fortunately, this is not difficult..." = "This was easy."
F: "Don't take it lightly (...)" = "Don't let it go to your head. The most difficult challenge lies before us. I am sending you away from this place."

Tutorial commands:
Pick up the weapon = Approach and pick up the weapon.
attack: x x x = Light attack: X
Heavy attack: Y Y Y = Heavy attack: Y
Flying knife: B = Throw knife: B
Press the right stick to lock the enemy and kill him! = Press R3 to lock on the enemy, then eliminate him.
Push the left stick to the enemy and execute it by RT. = Perform assassination by walking towards the enemy from behind and pressing RT.
Destroy all enemies with the skills you have learned! = Eliminate all enemies with newly learned skills.

[PureRok]

Camera Sensibility should be Sensitivity. Sensibility makes no sense.

[Daigoji Gai]

You're doing the lord's work. I was going to do the same.
Bravo.

[Cyranae]

Originally posted by Lamenre:

I need help with understanding this message to fix it properly:

Randomly forget a bloodthirsty
Randomly gain 10 to 90 defense

Can someone help me to understand it? What is 'bloodthirsty'? Is it different name for Bloody Spell? Or is it purple bar used as mana? Would this be correct?

Forget random Bloody Spell, and raise your defense by 10-90 points.

Yes, it makes you lose a level in a random Bloody Spell in order to get a temporary boost.

[VideoJones]

This would help a lot I'm sure. The translation is my only real gripe, but I totally get it. I couldn't translate a game into Chinese.

[windwaard]

This is really helpful! Maybe the devs don't check Steam discussions often enough to pick it up?

[Bleak]

Any Idea how to change back into human form after turning into that dog thing?

[Soul]

Originally posted by Grinchie:

Any Idea how to change back into human form after turning into that dog thing?

The prompts appear on the left side, if you are using a controler it's RT. I don't know on keyboard.

[Bleak]

Originally posted by 1ZSoul:

Originally posted by Grinchie:

Any Idea how to change back into human form after turning into that dog thing?

The prompts appear on the left side, if you are using a controler it's RT. I don't know on keyboard.

Im keyboard and found out it was "E" but thanks anyways!