Hentai Pick-pocket Adventure | 无尽扒手冒险

Hentai Pick-pocket Adventure | 无尽扒手冒险

The Old Taylor Swiftsz 2021 年 3 月 16 日 上午 9:22
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Overview:

'Hentai Pick-pocket Adventure | 无尽扒手冒险' is a short semi-softcore erotic visual novel telling the story of Ary, an easy to manipulate and desperate girl craving for sex and and her provocative "adventures" throughout her high school years. The novel itself is very short and can be finished in less than half an hour. The story itself is unimaginative and extremely forced when it comes to the more suggestive scenes (which is essentially 90% of the entire novel). The only characters introduced are ones Ary has a sexual attraction to and unsurprisingly ends up erotically entwined with one way or another simply because she just "couldn't resist" or wasn't thinking straight. In regards to the other characters however, they all lack personality and honestly serve no real purpose besides being a sexual pawn in Ary's adventure which again, feels extremely stretched and forced.

Gameplay:
Like a lot of cheap visual novels not originally cast in English, reading this was rather difficult. Not because the story itself was uninteresting but because translation to English was extremely poor. On top of using awkward vocabulary in areas where another word would've been more suitable, there are many other grammatical errors and typos to be found that are so bad it can actually cause heads to tilt. There had been a few times where I honest to god had to re-read what I was looking at because that was just how bad the translation was. My guess is that whoever was in charge of translating either converted each word literally with no regards to verb tenses, punctuation or perspective and what we got were scrambled sentences with no coherent meaning whatsoever.

As for the sexual content (which I'm sure most potential readers are after), 'Hentai Pick-pocket Adventure | 无尽扒手冒险' falls rather short. Although there is uncensored nudity, that's about the extent of it. They aren't immersive or satisfying in the least bit as they are portrayed within static polaroid photos and usually don't reflect what is said in the dialogue. So most of the time, I'm afraid you're going to have to rely mostly on your imagination to depict what the story is telling. The novel is void of cutscenes and cinematic sequences that could make the novel more enjoyable for readers. And when a suggestive scene DOES actually ensue, it is followed by a disappointing fade to black and the next scene starts right after. Kind of defeats the whole purpose of a novel being "visual" don't you think?

The ending is also abrupt and comes out of nowhere leaving players with an unexpected but obvious dissatisfying finish to an already awkward novel. Even worse is that after the novel ends, it throws the player into a black screen with no way to return to the main menu. So what do you do? Alt tab and end the task or perform the "meme-tastic" method of forcibly closing the application with the "Alt" and "F4" key. Admittedly, for a short story, it's rather hard to read.

Controls:
Unlike your typical novel which can be progressed with the mouse or spacebar, progressing dialogue here can only be done with the spacebar. There are also options to save and load but honestly, the novel is so short I'm confident you'll be able to complete it without needing to use any of those features. Something else that you aren't able to do that would be rather helpful is the ability to fast forward text. The ability to fast forward text in a visual novel is second nature and a basic feature all of them should have. However 'Hentai Pick-pocket Adventure | 无尽扒手冒险' doesn't have such a feature so you'll have to read at the same speed of the text scroll which although is relatively quick, just makes you wish you could press a key or click to have all the dialogue appear at once.

Graphics:
For a visual novel, graphics are important as most of the immersion stems off from how the developers present the story from a visual standpoint. If the artwork isn't good, people are more likely to become disinterested and disconnected from the characters in the story. The characters here look okay enough but some don't share the same style as others making it difficult to believe they're from the same universe. The backdrops are also a bit questionable because while some of them although do look nice, others are stretched and are of lower quality/resolution.

Put these two together and what you have is an inopportune story accompanied by inconsistent artwork and shoddy writing. It honestly feels like the developer threw together different sprites from different visual novel packs and crafted this masterpiece.

Audio:
Voice acting, a sweet bonus to any visual novel. But it's not that easy casting a decent ensemble of voice actors to play the characters in your story is it? That being said, 'Hentai Pick-pocket Adventure | 无尽扒手冒险' does not have any voice acting so it's up to you to interpret how the characters sound! That isn't a complaint or anything but it would be nice to hear the characters talk, although I have nothing against them not say anything. What you do get in spite of that is cheery background music that if I have to be honest, doesn't really fit the game all that much. It's hard to explain but I feel as though there could have been a better choice of music in this situation.

Conclusion/Tl;DR:
'Hentai Pick-pocket Adventure | 无尽扒手冒险' is an extremely short and lackluster erotic visual novel with little to offer. Peaking at around 20 minutes of reading, 'Hentai Pick-pocket Adventure | 无尽扒手冒险' has a rather broken English translation and a disheveled story begging for a proper ending. Sexual scenes are forced and do not provide any satisfaction literary or visually. For a low effort novel, there are definitely better ones out there.
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