我实在受不了了，游戏中有一个角色和我妈同名同姓。

买七彩绘色的游戏
就是为了抽奖挂卡喜加一
后来想着支持国产
就认真的玩一下这款作品

结果发现
现在都流行没做完游戏就开始卖么？
真是毒瘤
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从国产游戏的大局观来看
CG配音BGM都没什么好说的
但是你这个剧情真的大丈夫？
各种神奇中二对话
简直不能再尴尬

妹妹告白
哥哥直接失忆了一样
然后哥哥拒绝告白
就叫妹妹去死
还有喜欢怼人的黄发男子
全游戏我最NB的样子
加上那像是肾虚的声线
我的头痛症都要犯了
最新奇的是
男主约了两个妹子发现时间冲突
然后就去找另外一个打篮球的妹子去图书馆？？？
妈耶
这脑回路突破天际
天元突破啊我去

游戏开场和结尾的尬唱并不能跳过
剧情选项也简直莫名其妙
我完全不明白自己是如何改变
游戏的整体发展
文本校对好像不存在
好几处错别字简直是逗我笑
除了妹妹的立绘以外
其他角色好像是从低配世界穿越过来的

玩这个的每一分钟
我都觉得是煎熬
毫无意义高度重复的对话
搭配懒散棒读的配音
简直是催眠神器
然而还有人觉得治愈
这种人哪怕是三流网文小说也能看的很起劲吧

对于国产游戏我一直不追求什么
真的真的只要剧情好
我就肯买账
然而用心玩了下这款游戏
就觉得制作组好像把玩家当傻子看
（我甚至觉得这剧情连我小侄女都写得出）

也许有人会觉得我说的过分
但事实就是这样
消费者的胃口只会越来越大
不会越来越小
如果制作组梦想就是做这等水平的游戏
就当我什么都没说

我最近在做RPG
也想在steam上发售
但游戏各方面都做得不够格
剧情很多槽点
连我自己都忍不住吐槽
所以我深知要做出好游戏需要付出的辛苦和努力

既然想用心做好游戏
就拜托有点诚意好好写剧本
顺便做完了游戏在卖
否则真的很难让人信服

看其他评论说之前的更新还放了鸽子
如果你们以后的作品还是这个样
我会告诫身边的朋友不要在购买你们的任何作品
就这样

PS：
游戏运行时
按ALT+回车并不能将游戏正常变为全屏
而是将画面最左上角对应到鼠标指针上面
如果玩家将鼠标放在屏幕右边
你就会神奇的发现
画面直接跑到屏幕外面了
win7 64/win8.1 64
均会出现以上情况
希望制作组能尽快解决这个问题

I would not recommend this game in English in its current state. The translation quality is iffy and full of mistakes. There's very basic errors such as mixing up his/her (Mandarin Chinese has no gendered pronouns in speech) that indicate either machine translation or a very inexperienced translator.The translator's attempt to localize names is also laughably bad. We have a character early on introduced as "Martin Xu" in the text, but his name above the text box is "Ainsley Xu," and in the first few minutes of the game there are several other instances of this kind of mistake. Some of the UI isn't translated at all.
The voice acting and art seem decent enough, so if you understand Chinese then the game could very well be worth it. If you don't, then there's not much reason to buy the game right now except to get the free games from the release promotion.

Edit: Having played the game more, I'm not sure it's worth it at all, even if you do know Chinese. The English store page doesn't clearly mention this fact, but the game is currently in a highly incomplete state. Most of the routes and features the game is supposed to have haven't been implemented yet. Also, even accounting for the poor translation, the actual story seems to be badly written and contrived. At one point, the protagonist tells a girl "Why don't you just die" and she responds "Yes, you are right" and then kills herself. Maybe the upcoming updates for the game will improve things, but I doubt it.

虽然说6块钱买不了吃亏买不了上当，但国产GAL的通病在于剧情世人皆知。文本的无理与幼稚男主种种行为不符合正常人的认知，大学题材却不像大学生活的样子，日常剧情的平淡没有使得我对某个角色有较深的特点印象，选项转折的突兀男主变碑，错字校对的缺陷，以及半成品的剧本初发售线路并没有做完，制作难辞其咎。而与现实脱节这点，也许错的不是国产GAL作者而是世界。现实的大陆校园题材，也只能做成数值游戏的高考恋爱100天，抑或防止同学小报告 老师找谈话 尔虞我诈的逆转裁判，如果是大学题材，还可能要防止对象被导师拖到保研林，这是我们的基本国情所决定的。等到未来教育彻底市场化，老师学生都是贵族，肯定不会再出现这种情况，到时候校园里会充满着爱与赞歌！是Galgame中美好的后花园！有玫瑰与红茶，也有着金发双马尾。

不是很懂作者活跃的思维，第一次的选项选了2直接后边会导致男主说出让妹妹去死这种话，真他妈的神了你男主设定这得是有多恨妹妹，游玩的时候就是在全篇探地雷，你直接去做个二次元版的扫雷得了，还做啥恋爱游戏。6块买来挂个卡结束，个人感觉剧本稀烂

所以ひこうき雲の向こう側什么时候发布

为什么妹妹线没有goodend！为什么！我要去德国我要去骨科

是我年纪大了吗，感觉兄妹名字还有很多台词....


好羞耻......

This romance visual novel with drama, fan service and point and click minigames(Also known as Yao Wang Bi Fang or 遥望彼方）by 七彩绘色 (Qicai Huise) features a male protagonist Muse Xu/Xu Musi （许暮思）, a young second-year student at Zhonglin College. Muse grew up and lived with his mother Mildred Xu （许母）and would also often hang out, play and have meals together with his cousin sister Eureka Liu/Liu Binian （柳彼念）where she also attends the same college as a first-year student.

At Zhonglin College, Muse would get to know his classmates Hope Chu/Chu Wang （楚望）, Jade Fang/Fang Lin（方琳）, his class president Ainsley Xu/Xu Qing （徐清）and the captain of the college's female basketball team Clara Liu/Liu Hui （刘慧）.

One day, Eureka asks Muse to see her at a park where she starts to tell a story about the manjusaka flower/red spider lily （彼岸花）which was believed to come into existence where a brother and sister(both lesser deities) came to love each other, disobeyed Heaven's laws and broke a taboo by being together as a couple. Heaven turned them into the flower and the leaf of the red spider lily where the flower and leaves will never be together at the same time as their punishment. After many generations and life cycles of the plant, Buddha was moved by their feelings for each other and reunited the two deities by turning them back into their former selves before disappearing.

Eureka then makes a bold proposal to Muse on whether Muse can stay by her side as a source of support and as her boyfriend. Muse can accept her proposal or decline and go to listen in on Jade's prepared English speech rehearsal or to participate in a basketball match with Hope in attendance.

In Clara DLC, Muse gets into an argument with Hope after passing out from the basketball match and makes a bet that he could win Hope in a basketball game. Knowing that he is physically unfit compared to the more athletic Hope, Muse decides to approach Clara for help in training him on his basketball skills.

In Happy Birthday DLC, Muse decides to gather his friends Hope, Jade and Clara to help make Eureka's 18th birthday occasion a specially memorable one for her.

After spending over 20 hours to read and listen through the common route, 4 romance routes with Eureka, Hope, Jade and Clara, the free unlockable Happy Birthday DLC and locate all collectible items, I decided to give this game a score of 9/10(8/10 in English version) based on the following factors:

Plot and character backgrounds
The plot is written as a romance visual novel with drama, plenty of different endings(good, bad, tragicomic and true). The scriptwriter does an excellent job by having Eureka, Hope and Jade's route have a different theme and character background where each girl pursues their ambition differently and independently from one another with at least one different supporting character that appears only in their route. This makes it interesting to read and listen throughout all 3-5 hours in each route with approximately another hour of reading in each DLC. In the collection minigame, there are 30 different objects in the background scene or CG which will provide further context to the story when it is obtained.

Yet at the same time, some of the choices do not make sense or are not immediately obvious. Certain choices such as choosing whether the protagonist likes the flower or the leaf of the red spider lily more or whether the protagonist is thinking of Eureka or Hope will make a difference between a bad, good or true ending many hours later towards the end of the route. Although published community guides are available to help players reach the desired endings, some of these choices can still mean many hours of replaying the game, making multiple saves and skipping through text and dialogue.

There are also many errors in the English version of this game where I have to give it a lower score for those who are playing it in English. There are fewer errors in the Chinese version although there are still a number of errors between the displayed text and the voiced dialogue throughout the game.

Artwork, backgrounds and CGs
The background art, CGs, opening and ending themes, game and soundtrack album cover, Steam achievements and emoticons in the game are attractive, bright and colourful. There are plenty of CGs showing small movements and facial expressions. The background scenes have sufficient variety where different places will show the place during the morning, afternoon and night. The opening theme has beautiful animation while the ending themes will feature an animated slideshow of different CGs and character sprites depending on the ending obtained, with a different song with vocals. The additional objects that are added into the collection minigame, background scenes and CGs are more or less consistent within the context of the scene or CG and help to make this game interesting.

Voice acting and background music
The voice acting, background music and soundtracks are top-notch and are the main highlight of this visual novel. The tone and pace of delivery from all the voice actors and actresses in this game are top-notch in matching each line of spoken dialogue in the game. Whether to make fun of a character, to admonish or to chide a character, express annoyance and dissatisfaction, to mutter something very softly, cry outright, show feelings of love, friendship or to make a punch line grab the attention of the listener; the voice acting was excellent.

The background music are great by being appropriate to match the different moments in the game or each female main character with very good accompanying background music instruments that can be heard clearly in each FLAC file that is in the OST included with the DLC which also contain full versions of each theme song with vocals. My favourite BGM is I'm right beside you （我在你身边）that is usually played during the lively banter with Hope Chu.

Among the theme song with vocals, it has a very special and inspirational theme song in the opening theme and insert theme songs A road to forever （一路拾光）by having very good vocal and musical accompaniment by Qiao Yang（晓珜） (My favourite song) and Ah Xin from Gui Pu（阿信【归璞】）. The ending theme songs Summer and you （半夏年华与你）by Chu Xia Xiao Xi（初夏小溪）match the happier true endings in 3 of the routes while Snowing on the bank （彼岸有风雪）by Gu Qing from Huiyin Peiyin（古卿【绘音配音】）match a tragic ending.

Overall, this game is highly recommended with DLC for those who are looking for a romance visual novel with drama, fan service and point and click minigames in a modern Chinese setting, great voice acting, soundtracks, artwork and doesn't mind a number of errors in the game. For those who can read Chinese and are interested in collecting Chinese visual novels and the titles by SakuraGame, this game is recommended with the Love Bundle. I hope to see SakuraGame bring in more Chinese visual novels to the Love Bundle and other bundles in future. I am also recommending this game because the developer promised to fix a problem of the Clara DLC being unable to start within 2 working days after the problem was reported and the patch update was released within one day.


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