Writing script for a fnaf fan film.

[Big Doughy]

I'm writing a script for a fnaf fan film I'm making and I'd like to reel you guys the story: Mike Schmidts year of high school is finally over. His parents are out of town so it's just him and his sister Mary. Before his parents leave he promised them he'd get a summer job. He then then gets a job as a security night guard at Freddy fazbears pizza. What mike doesn't know is that the animatronics there come to life at night and kill whoever tress passes.
What do you guys think of it? Is it good? Should I change something about it? Post a comment and tell me what you think.

[TheWolfman]

Add Fritz Smith ;)

[Lord Egg]

Noice

[It'sBumbleboy]

Sounds intresting!



If voices needed totally ask me I can help

[Big Doughy]

Thanks for liking my work. I hope you guys watch it once I finish it :D

[It'sBumbleboy]

Αναρτήθηκε αρχικά από 🎃SG92🎃:

Thanks for liking my work. I hope you guys watch it once I finish it :D

Totally will!

[blue teletubby]

That sounds great!

[crstl]

how will you be creating the film?

[Chris P. Bacon]

Αναρτήθηκε αρχικά από Bumbleboy11:

Αναρτήθηκε αρχικά από 🎃SG92🎃:

Thanks for liking my work. I hope you guys watch it once I finish it :D

Totally will!

do you have a youtube channel? I seen your pp once before..

[Big Doughy]

Αναρτήθηκε αρχικά από Crstl:

how will you be creating the film?

I'm gonna film it with a movie camera I have. I already have the costumes for the animatronics. Then I'm gonna upload it on my channel

[bordanka]

It's ok for fan film. You will do it in FSM, or it's a live action?

[It'sBumbleboy]

Αναρτήθηκε αρχικά από Chris P. Bacon (WolfSpartan):

Αναρτήθηκε αρχικά από Bumbleboy11:

Totally will!

do you have a youtube channel? I seen your pp once before..

Yes I do ;)

[Big Doughy]

Guys I've rewritten a new story for my film I think it's better:
Mike Schmidt is an investigator on the dissaperence of the past nightguard who worked at Freddy fazbears pizza but disappeared for some unknown reason. Mike gets the job to get more clues on what happend to the past nightguard. What mike doesn't know is he might join the same fate as the past security guard.
So what do you think?

[It'sBumbleboy]

Αναρτήθηκε αρχικά από 🎃SG92🎃:

Guys I've rewritten a new story for my film I think it's better:
Mike Schmidt is an investigator on the dissaperence of the past nightguard who worked at Freddy fazbears pizza but disappeared for some unknown reason. Mike gets the job to get more clues on what happend to the past nightguard. What mike doesn't know is he might join the same fate as the past security guard.
So what do you think?

I like this one :D

[bordanka]

Αναρτήθηκε αρχικά από 🎃SG92🎃:

Guys I've rewritten a new story for my film I think it's better:
Mike Schmidt is an investigator on the dissaperence of the past nightguard who worked at Freddy fazbears pizza but disappeared for some unknown reason. Mike gets the job to get more clues on what happend to the past nightguard. What mike doesn't know is he might join the same fate as the past security guard.
So what do you think?

I think it's much better. I'm waiting for your film!

[jupiter]

Αναρτήθηκε αρχικά από Chris P. Bacon (WolfSpartan):

Αναρτήθηκε αρχικά από Bumbleboy11:

Totally will!

do you have a youtube channel? I seen your pp once before..

Uhhhh... I hope you mean people... Not... Uh... The "special" area...