SERIAL KILLER Rogue Build!

[Deaf Sparrow]

Been getting back into this game after taking a hiatus from playing it due to reviewing other games. I forgot how fun it was! Anyway, I plan on making guides for each of the classes, but for now I just finished a guide for the Rogue class that makes you a SERIAL KILLER! I'll probably add a video to it to show how I use it, later, but for now it's all text. Let me know what you think and if you have any questions.

https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2872391444

[slartifer]

Congrats on finishing the guide! It's clear you put a lot of effort in and have some nice screenshots to illustrate things, etc.

My main feedback (especially if you plan to write 3 more of these) is that the guide is basically 20% information and 80% "look at how AMAZING this card/set/build is." The info you have is good, but it's extremely spread out due to the sheer quantity of "fluff" sentences/paragraphs. And that makes it harder to "digest" the guide as a reader.

Similarly, after the 5th time I read "this may be the most critical card" I started to feel like maybe there is such a thing as too many compliments :)

I'd suggest you aim for the reverse proportion -- 80% substance, and 20% colorful commentary. Then you'll have a guide that is entertaining but also easy to refer to, informative, and useful.

[Deaf Sparrow]

Publicado originalmente por slartifer:

Congrats on finishing the guide! It's clear you put a lot of effort in and have some nice screenshots to illustrate things, etc.

My main feedback (especially if you plan to write 3 more of these) is that the guide is basically 20% information and 80% "look at how AMAZING this card/set/build is." The info you have is good, but it's extremely spread out due to the sheer quantity of "fluff" sentences/paragraphs. And that makes it harder to "digest" the guide as a reader.

Similarly, after the 5th time I read "this may be the most critical card" I started to feel like maybe there is such a thing as too many compliments :)

I'd suggest you aim for the reverse proportion -- 80% substance, and 20% colorful commentary. Then you'll have a guide that is entertaining but also easy to refer to, informative, and useful.

Awesome man. I'll go through the next week or so and make some adjustments to it.

[Deaf Sparrow]

Publicado originalmente por slartifer:

Congrats on finishing the guide! It's clear you put a lot of effort in and have some nice screenshots to illustrate things, etc.

My main feedback (especially if you plan to write 3 more of these) is that the guide is basically 20% information and 80% "look at how AMAZING this card/set/build is." The info you have is good, but it's extremely spread out due to the sheer quantity of "fluff" sentences/paragraphs. And that makes it harder to "digest" the guide as a reader.

Similarly, after the 5th time I read "this may be the most critical card" I started to feel like maybe there is such a thing as too many compliments :)

I'd suggest you aim for the reverse proportion -- 80% substance, and 20% colorful commentary. Then you'll have a guide that is entertaining but also easy to refer to, informative, and useful.

Made some edits that should read better and focus more on play with almost no fluff.

[Samseng Yik]

The best show case will be how to beat the 666 demon.
A lot players trying to find the best build combination to beat this.
But it still require luck (of course because you are against "devil luck")

[Deaf Sparrow]

Publicado originalmente por Samseng Yik:

The best show case will be how to beat the 666 demon.
A lot players trying to find the best build combination to beat this.
But it still require luck (of course because you are against "devil luck")

Yeah I still need to unlock that we'll see how this build does for it.

[Deaf Sparrow]

Publicado originalmente por Samseng Yik:

The best show case will be how to beat the 666 demon.
A lot players trying to find the best build combination to beat this.
But it still require luck (of course because you are against "devil luck")

It's actually easy. I had to tweak it a bit, but it was a cinch. Check out the extra section I added to see what I did!