The Sad Story of Emmeline Burns

The Sad Story of Emmeline Burns

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rincewind Jan 10, 2016 @ 7:52am
Thank you for making this Ebi-Hime
I just needed to say it.

Was a beautiful experience. The charming writting, the lovely art, the beautiful music fitting every scene. Everything was just perfect.
For a little fragment of time, I just was sucked into another age, and suffered, cried, smiled and rejoiced with the protagonists of this marvelous work.

Again, thank you.
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ebihime  [developer] Jan 10, 2016 @ 11:28am 
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was a lot of fun to work on, too! This soft/sentimental writing style is a lot of fun (and I think it suits Selly's art nicely uehe), I should practice writing more stuff in this style.
rincewind Jan 11, 2016 @ 1:34am 
I'm glad that you had fun writting it. Was certainly fun to read.
And must agree that the cute fluffy art was a perfect match for the wirting.
Nelly and Emmy are the cutest couple in the Victorian Era. Their interactions are wonderful.

And I must add that I loved that you ended the story in a positive note.
Both, with Nelly and Emmy reunited in the afterlife, and Toma finding love with Hattie.
While I like drama and protagonists suffering hardships, I usually prefer they earning their happy endings.
In this case the end was very satisfying and emotional.

And keep practicing the style, I would love to see more yuri in this style for sure. :compa:
Latsk Jan 15, 2016 @ 11:26am 
I'll join in thanking you for this wonderful experience. It was sort but great. :protangonist:
Last edited by Latsk; Jan 15, 2016 @ 11:28am
Melusca Jan 27, 2016 @ 12:27pm 
I read the yurijam version last year and was pleasantly surprised to see a bonus scene with Hattie (who was very different from how I imagined her) in this one. Wraps up the story pretty nicely.
aksnv88 Jan 31, 2016 @ 10:25am 
This is the first visual novel I've ever gone through and I really enjoyed it.
Thank you for making this!
tazamiga Feb 20, 2016 @ 4:17am 
Originally posted by ebihime:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was a lot of fun to work on, too! This soft/sentimental writing style is a lot of fun (and I think it suits Selly's art nicely uehe), I should practice writing more stuff in this style.
Beautiful work and i even learnt a new word 'somnambulist' though i am confused that somehow i missed a single achievement . Never mind got it now, i didn't notice the extras at first. I also really loved the music as well as the artwork by the way.
Last edited by tazamiga; Feb 20, 2016 @ 4:30am
amcjkelly Nov 24, 2017 @ 11:57pm 
Yes, thank you!
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