Screenshots dialogue mistakes

[Rivia]

This post is to help the devs in identifying dialogue mistakes. I love the game a lot and hope with these screenshots I can help the devs :)

Dialogue mistakes 25/4/2017

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=911818564

> saysr

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=909694290

> find up

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=911818515

> We have to do a lot to maintain order in this city. I think this sounds better then the current version. But you can correct me if I am wrong.

I also don't really get the part ''if we want to get ahead''. Do you mean like: ''if we want to move forward'''?

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=913042455

> ''of'' should be taken out of this sentence

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=913042397

> ''they'' is not written with a capital letter here

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=913042360

> I did not know what coffers ment till I looked it up. Maybe change it to boxes?

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=913042323

> has a vision for the future of this village. I think ''of'' does not work here

NEW dialogue mistakes 25/4/2017 8.34 PM

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=913193063

> Our should be us

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=913193091

> Got to should be gone to

http://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=913207686

> Plane?? should be place right?

NEW dialogue mistakes 18/5/2017 PM - thanks to FullMast3rM1ind

''http://www.mediafire.com/view/38c7c7l773els4b/Shiness__The_Lightning_Kingdom_20170516170641.png''

> 'They' should be, 'the'.

''http://www.mediafire.com/view/kanulz4v5el6ixr/Shiness__The_Lightning_Kingdom_20170510181305.png''

-> Air in this description should be, Earth.

[Rivia]

If anyone finds more dialogue mistakes aside from the ones already posted, please put them in this post so the devs can look at it :) Just share your screenshot and put a small text underneath of what is wrong with the dialogue. Then I can add it to the main post.

[Chef Milkeux]

Hi,

Thank you so much! I'll integrate this right away ;)

Have a good game!

[Rivia]

Originally posted by Chef Milkeux:

Hi,

Thank you so much! I'll integrate this right away ;)

Have a good game!

No problem :) I just want to help you guys. If that's ok with you guys can you pin this for other people to see? So they can add screenshots as well. I will add more screenshots myself if I come by mistakes

[Chef Milkeux]

Pretty good idea ;) We will check that daily!

Thanks again for your help!

[FullMast3rM1nd]

I have the PS4 version, but if I catch any errors in the dialog, I'll be sure to post screenshots here as well.

[FullMast3rM1nd]

Not just dialog, but also anywhere else in game that I may see translation errors. Thank you guys for working so hard on this game. It warms my heart to see indie developers put so much effort into their creations.

[Rivia]

Originally posted by FullMast3rM1nd:

Not just dialog, but also anywhere else in game that I may see translation errors. Thank you guys for working so hard on this game. It warms my heart to see indie developers put so much effort into their creations.

Thank you for the help :) I have been busy with exams etc for the last few weeks so I did not have time to add more screen shots. Will start working on it again after exams :)

[FullMast3rM1nd]

No problem. I'm fully aware of having a very busy life. Things only recently calmed down for me.

[Rivia]

Originally posted by FullMast3rM1nd:

No problem. I'm fully aware of having a very busy life. Things only recently calmed down for me.

^^ Happy that you want to help with finding mistakes. Thank you!

[FullMast3rM1nd]

I'll be uploading my findings thus far within the next day.

By the way, your last correction is actually already right. They use plane as in, "plane of existence". One other note, even though 'our' does not roll off smoothly it still is acceptable for it's usage in that sentence.

[FullMast3rM1nd]

I've been spending more time exploring and just having fun with the combat system, as well as trying to collect/barter everything I can. Because of that, I haven't made much progress in the actual story.

[FullMast3rM1nd]

I have found two so far. I seem to be unable to upload the screenshots directly, so I'm using MediaFire instead. Just remove the quotes at the begining and the end of each link. Steam automatically removes the links if I just paste them in directly.


"http://www.mediafire.com/view/38c7c7l773els4b/Shiness__The_Lightning_Kingdom_20170516170641.png"
-'They' should be, 'the'.

"http://www.mediafire.com/view/kanulz4v5el6ixr/Shiness__The_Lightning_Kingdom_20170510181305.png"
- Air in this description should be, Earth.

I haven't found other errors in the dialog that you haven't already listed. I'll keep a keen eye out for others.

[Rivia]

Originally posted by FullMast3rM1nd:

I have found two so far. I seem to be unable to upload the screenshots directly, so I'm using MediaFire instead. Just remove the quotes at the begining and the end of each link. Steam automatically removes the links if I just paste them in directly.


"http://www.mediafire.com/view/38c7c7l773els4b/Shiness__The_Lightning_Kingdom_20170516170641.png"
-'They' should be, 'the'.

"http://www.mediafire.com/view/kanulz4v5el6ixr/Shiness__The_Lightning_Kingdom_20170510181305.png"
- Air in this description should be, Earth.

I haven't found other errors in the dialog that you haven't already listed. I'll keep a keen eye out for others.

Thanks :) I added it to the post

[Pollux]

Here is one I found.
https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=1387407414