Brink of Consciousness: Dorian Gray Syndrome

Brink of Consciousness: Dorian Gray Syndrome

Sweet Kairi May 2, 2015 @ 12:14pm
The bonus ending (warning spoilers)
I REALLY enjoyed how it ended. Was a surprise and even though it's an idea thats been used before, it actually caught me off guard. The only issue I have with it is the girlfriend would have easily been able to point out the corpse as the killer and kept the journalist from ever being investigated. I think that small detail could have been fixed with a little more story telling. It's not that big of a deal, but it just came to mind.
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Daniel Kay Feb 11, 2017 @ 11:40pm 
That, and you were carrying a tape recorder the whole time that recorded ALL things Oscar said, including his final confession.

To me the ending would have been perfect if you held up the recorder just as Oscar drowned showing him you got it all on tape and he dies knowing he F-ed up at the very end.
Last edited by Daniel Kay; Feb 11, 2017 @ 11:41pm
Clarrisani Feb 14, 2017 @ 7:26am 
Originally posted by Daniel Kay:
That, and you were carrying a tape recorder the whole time that recorded ALL things Oscar said, including his final confession.

To me the ending would have been perfect if you held up the recorder just as Oscar drowned showing him you got it all on tape and he dies knowing he F-ed up at the very end.

That ending would be perfect and very fitting.
Solipsiste Feb 10, 2020 @ 5:36pm 
Hey it does not really work. No police investigation would have lead to the accusation of the journalist. We just need not to overthink it. I liked the ending nevertheless.
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