Game Review Makes No Sense!!!

[WarKing]

“Squirt’s Adventure is more motivating than are traditional books and worksheets that introduce beginning letters.”
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If the person who wrote that quote speaks English, they deserve to be lined up against a wall and shot. Horrible use of the English language. This regarding the use of 'are'

[RonjaLin]

Calm down, the game teaches words and not grammatics. :-)

[WarKing]

Originally posted by Protoss:

Calm down, the game teaches words and not grammatics. :-)

So it wants children to speak as much sense as those who don't speak your language, and thus make no sense.
eg. Timmy - "Mother, This onomatopoeia is astonishing"
Timmys' Mother - "That's your penis Timmy..."
Timmy - "Bother not thy maiden sword"
Timmys' Mother - "wtf Timmy?"

[Pangolin Legends: Arceus]

Originally posted by WarKing:

If the person whom wrote that quote speaks English, they deserve to be lined up against a wall and shot. Horrible use of the English language.

It's "who" not "whom".
Have you picked out a wall for yourself?

[zhunGamerTTV (人^▽')～]

It actually is 'who'.
He, who does not see the difference, shall be whom is struck by the wings of irony. Or somethin'.

[WarKing]

Originally posted by graspee:

Originally posted by WarKing:

If the person whom wrote that quote speaks English, they deserve to be lined up against a wall and shot. Horrible use of the English language.

It's "who" not "whom".
Have you picked out a wall for yourself?

Whom? I see no whom...*quivering*

[Arale//Zero]

You do realize there are forms of punishment besides death? It's just a grammar mistake. Something you definitely shouldn't have on your review page - especially not for an educational game - but not severe enough to warrant the hyperbole you're spouting.

[Pangolin Legends: Arceus]

Originally posted by cynicalIncarnation//Demo:

You do realize there are forms of punishment besides death? It's just a grammar mistake. Something you definitely shouldn't have on your review page - especially not for an educational game - but not severe enough to warrant the hyperbole you're spouting.

He deleted the post a while back so I think he realizes.
My mistake it's still there- it was the top post.

[Ꝙ Ghosthunter Ꝙ]

The game is total fun.

It's actually teach me some word i never knew.

[Jarjarstar]

How bout instead of complaining here you comment on their Review, not make a discussion about it. People need too learn how to use steam properly. I left a variety of gramair mistakes in here just for you. :)

[Lemon Head]

From the video of the two that we have in steam two things seem very abrubt about this.
One your useing the mouse which could be taken for anything but a cusor and clicking on objects that match the letter and this other room where you can collect stuff and move about at will ?. What else does this game do besides those two challenges ?.

[Arale//Zero]

Originally posted by graspee:

Originally posted by cynicalIncarnation//Demo:

You do realize there are forms of punishment besides death? It's just a grammar mistake. Something you definitely shouldn't have on your review page - especially not for an educational game - but not severe enough to warrant the hyperbole you're spouting.

He deleted the post a while back so I think he realizes.

"If the person who wrote that quote speaks English, they deserve to be lined up against a wall and shot" -WarKing

Looking at this quote for the second time, I see that it actually seems to be implying people with mental disabilities should be killed.

[Lemon Head]

you could take a quote anyway you wish but there are many people out there with those view points so yes it could be that but im just saying it could be. Not nessacerraly so.

[WarKing]

Originally posted by cynicalIncarnation//Demo:

Originally posted by graspee:

He deleted the post a while back so I think he realizes.

"If the person who wrote that quote speaks English, they deserve to be lined up against a wall and shot" -WarKing

Looking at this quote for the second time, I see that it actually seems to be implying people with mental disabilities should be killed.

HAHA How did you come to that conclusion?
In reality the part about being lined up against a wall and shot was a very british joke for british people, if you are british and do not understand it...watch television.

[WarKing]

Originally posted by cynicalIncarnation//Demo:

You do realize there are forms of punishment besides death? It's just a grammar mistake. Something you definitely shouldn't have on your review page - especially not for an educational game - but not severe enough to warrant the hyperbole you're spouting.

The 'pun' implication in this post originated from British television, you appear to have missed it completely. I am not that cynical in actuality.

[Avi the Raccoon Enjoyer]

Originally posted by WarKing:

Timmys' Mother - "That's your penis Timmy..."