Demo Feedback

[AeroFunk80]

Overall, I think this is a great game and has a ton of potential. Here's my feedback:

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THE GOOD
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1. I love the artwork and environment. This is my type of game.

2. I love twin-stick shooters, and you did a great job with combat! Enjoyed it quite a bit.

3. Looks like there will be a nice amount of searching, scavenging and crafting. Excited to see where this all goes.

4. You can never go wrong with a post-apocalyptic zombie game! :-)

5. Music was good. Very ambient, dark and set the mood of the game.

6. Love how you have options: stealth, run in and gun, melee combat, using exploding barrels. You have some nice variety to combat. Well done!

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SUGGESTIONS
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1. Those yellow nests that create the zombies spawns them way too fast. I finally just ran in, melee attacked the zombies, and then shot the nest. Used a LOT of med kits to do this, though. Maybe the nest spawns a lot slower and a bit faster when it's being attacked?

2. The zombies all wear the same outfit and color. If you can't give them different outfits, maybe just change up the color of their shirt/pants. Maybe add some dirt, blood and wear to their clothing. They'll look more like zombies if they're clothing isn't so clean and nice :-)

3. While I can watch my filter health, you should give an audio indication that I need to replace it just in case I'm exploring, fighting, etc.

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THE WRITING
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1. I hate to insult your potential writer (or translator) but the dialogue feels a bit robotic and bland. I think your game would really benefit by giving your characters a bit more personality. I'm a writer, myself, and just cleaning up some of the dialogue and adding a bit of flare could really make the character's shine. For example...

JACK says: "Very nice to meet you, John. I'm sure I can contribute. I can also improve your weapons or craft ammunition."

Or he could say: "Oh, thank God! It's so nice to meet another human. I'd be thrilled to join your group. I can also pitch in by enhancing your weapons and craft ammo when needed. You know... gotta do my part."

That being said, feel free to reach out. I'm a freelance writer (if interested).

[artdock_developer]

Thanks for your feedback, much appreciated! A lot of cool details you got here, we would really like to contact you for more details on your proposal.

[AeroFunk80]

I didn't realize you messaged me back. I'm so sorry for missing that. Reach out anytime, friend me, and I also sent my Discord :-) Look forward to talking!