The correction of "The Professor" 😭💢👺

[Thorgrax]

Im working on an Amazon E-book. please let me know what you think of this sample. Thank You and bless soyence 🙏

"In the bustling studio of Firewalk, Professor Lisa Brown had always dazzled her peers with her supposed academic title, claiming to hold a prestigious vaxxination from the University of Higher Learning (UOH). However, behind the façade, she was just a political activist who had slipped into the gaming industry, masquerading as an expert to secure a position of power at the latest innovative project, Concord. Her ability to manipulate code and design immersive worlds was remarkable, but when her colleagues began to question the legitimacy of her credentials, they stumbled upon inconsistencies. As whispers of "Cunny Conman" spread through the office, the pressure mounted. Eventually, her elaborate web of deceit unraveled in a spectacular fashion during a presentation meant to unveil their latest game, where she forgot key elements she claimed to have developed, leaving her exposed as an insane fraud. The only thing left to do was to Plap out an apology, knowing her dreams in the industry were irreversibly shattered."

https://youtu.be/Z-PtBulYhAA?si=jaMM7qOC0O3ni8DA

[Orki]

not bad

[IkanBawe]

😭💢💢💢