Plot balancing

[oldsoldiergame]

Hi guys!

I am making this post to allow you to report us things about the plot of the game that maybe aren't clear (either because of the lack of information or because of less than perfect translations). Also, write us if you think there should be some additional scenes that didn't occur to me during development.
I'm already working on fixing some things in both chapter 1 and 2, but I welcome your help in looking for mistakes I might've missed.

[Rasak]

HI,

I restarted the game 3 times to see if i missed something.

What I have noticed is that during the story some cards that are won as a result of battles disappear from the deck, for no reason.

That the difference in strength with the ship's cook is too great to be defeated in a duel.

And that regardless of the choices made, you can't ♥♥♥♥ the helmsman.

For the rest it's really one of the best games of the genre I've played and the Italian translation is perfect.

Can't wait to continue the story!

[oldsoldiergame]

I will add you in private to try to better understand the problem encountered.

[Rudiuspatudius]

Should be some instructions on how the forge works, I did combine a couple of cards which increased their stats. And I purchased another card (the poison) however I had no Idea about having to keep 10 cards in the deck. When I went to the arena none of my combined cards showed up but I guess that is because I couldn't save. Would be nice if you could earn some gold other than fighting because I have only won one fight and my job as a waiter doesn't pay much and I am not really sure when I get paid. The game is fun, it reminds me of some of the earlier games I used to play (without the sex) Maybe add some grinding or some gathering so a person could actually get some money. I am never going to get enough money to buy some more ♥♥♥♥♥, I mean cards. Thanks for the fun game!

[Rasak]

Originally posted by oldsoldiergame:

I will add you in private to try to better understand the problem encountered.

Of course, I remain available.

[Drakenfel]

• The cards should have individual descriptions that the player can read over more thoroughly.
• Marassa and Anaya seem to be from an entirely separate culture from the MC who seems to be in a kind of Magical Feudal system while they seem to be in a Tribal Chiefdom. This is cool but then they just magically speak English it isn’t that bad as her brother seemed to leave the island pretty easily and integrate into a merchants crew but I would still like to see them with a more broken English that reverts to their native tongue when they get emotional. Showing that this isn’t their native tongue and maybe learning a bit more about them expanding the world lore as it can be used as a segway into learning about their culture and peoples. ie. She says an unknown word you find out it’s a ritual, place, insult when you inquire and you can learn more about their home and they themselves.
• Anaya got barley any screen time. There was a zombie apocalypse, an ‘evil’ sorceress and a twist bad guy. Anaya and this chapter had an amazing premise but was entirely too short for me.
• Min’s Peoples. Her people seem really isolated as the MC seems turned off by human sacrifice which is a large part of most cultures in their support or opposition thereof, Marassa and Anaya’s Tribe can be explained as there is a connection with the MC’s world it can be somewhat explained due to her brother which could imply a more interconnected peoples but Min’s tribe seems far more isolated and I just would have liked a few scenes of establishing communications with her and slowly building a relationship with her as you do.
• Min’s Sacrifice. I think Min should struggle a lot more with her choice this is a magical world so in all likelihood the sacrifice was legitimate and while I don’t fault her for running away she should be far more devastated by the thought that her actions just killed every friend and family member she has ever known throughout her entire life. It would take a lot longer to help her overcome something like that.
• Swashilin. I don’t know if you were going for it or not but I do hate her so congrats if that’s the direction you were going but I would like to mess with her a bit more. She really doesn’t even try to get along with anyone else.
• Ashana. In most media Elves are portrayed as haughty with a superiority complex. Your Elves seem to fit as well but with the added bonus of being obscenely wealthy to boot. Species, culture, wealth gap how did she end up married to some random human? Why did her people agree to it? If they did agree why isn’t he forced to work like a dog on their lands to prove himself to her family? This could probably be explained if you add a ‘We eloped and ran away together’ line but she seemed to act like they could return at any time without consequences so it doesn’t really fit right now.
• Celsi. My two favourite FL characters were Celsi and Anaya as I thought their characters were the most intriguing however neither really did that much but Celsi did play conductor during a storm and b***h slap mother nature so that was cool but I would have liked a bit more character development. Anaya is way back there on the island but Celsi was on the ship the entire time so I would have liked to spend more time with her.

[TysonL]

add ntr / sharing content please

[kennethdevault2]

Do you want any assistance with typos? spelling errors type of stuff? I can do that in my spare time ez enough. I don't mind, just need a place to post the screen shot and the typo. Other than that, keep rolling. I'm ready for chapter III. :)