The Dragon Chapter. There is still a lot of potential.

[☠Dragnoros, der Wächter]

First of all, this is my personal opinion, so you may disagree.

I myself think the idea is actually very good in concept, but some of the dialog doesn't fit or just missing.

How the princess reacts is okay, considering that our hero with the 3 voices probably sees her as weak and fragile thanks to the end of Chapter 2 and if the body itself has this power and not the “soul”.

But what doesn't work for me is the “monologue” about whether the Narator's voice counts or not. There are 3 personality traits and the narator. The “cold voice” would have to have abstained, which I would find a little bit strange.

But what bothers me the most is that you can't tell the “voice of the opportunist” what you think or tell the hero that the princess hoped he would be okay. Or that the princess also gives her opinion here, since she knows the voices. I would find it funny if the princess suddenly came very close, so that she looked directly into his eye and gave him her opinion xD. The Narator's reaction would certainly be funny after this situation.

There are really endless possibilities to add “explore things” later on.

[Sanmei]

The Cold is consistently apathetic, so I fully headcanon that his contribution to the vote was "Slay her or don't. It's all the same to me. Just do something." I believe he says almost exactly this in the Wraith route.

[☠Dragnoros, der Wächter]

I see the cold more than someone who goes along with someone dominant. That's why I would rather assume that he go with the opportunist because he is more aggresiv as the hero. especially with the Narator behind the opportunist.

[hi]

Did you get the gentle princess or the harsh princess for this chapter?

[☠Dragnoros, der Wächter]

Originally posted by hi:

Did you get the gentle princess or the harsh princess for this chapter?

i dint try to kill the ghost... so i guess the gentrly princess. i gonna check the harsh princess now

[hi]

Originally posted by ☠Dragnoros, der Wächter:

Originally posted by hi:

Did you get the gentle princess or the harsh princess for this chapter?

i dint try to kill the ghost... so i guess the gentrly princess. i gonna check the harsh princess now

Yeah harsh has a lot more drama (for a lack of a better term) happen