Lucas Colmenero wrote the ending for this game for sure

[Scheißhaufen Klaus]

Come on, let Maya do the writing ok? What is this freak ending trying to tell me? try to recreate your non-sense romance by follow a childish girl who just abandoned all her responsibilities? Max has just bravely broke into the storm and saved everyone out of chaos, and Rafi still learned nothing from that?

[Scheißhaufen Klaus]

Safi

[Iggy Wolf]

Honestly, the 180 in her character in just the SAME scene made no sense to me. One moment she's apologizing and considering the consequences, the next she's channeling a God complex and considers non-supers below her and lacks any empathy. Like some people on Reddit said, it feels like they turned her into Magneto.

Shooting her and killing her seemed like the most sane choice at that moment, even if it was the choice that led to this mess in the first place, but it seems like it would have made more sense in the middle or beginning, when she was ready to accept her fate. I'm not sure there was any thought put into it, since you never really learn who actually shot her in the first place (Max wasn't actually present at the overlook when you heard the gunshot, unless you count another timeline Max somehow phasing into existence at that point, and doing the deed).

[peter4i4ik]

Some episodes here were written by Maya - what he copied, but most of the plot was definitely bad copy done by Colmenero from LIS1

[peter4i4ik]

Originally posted by Iggy Wolf:

Honestly, the 180 in her character in just the SAME scene made no sense to me. One moment she's apologizing and considering the consequences, the next she's channeling a God complex and considers non-supers below her and lacks any empathy. Like some people on Reddit said, it feels like they turned her into Magneto.

Shooting her and killing her seemed like the most sane choice at that moment, even if it was the choice that led to this mess in the first place, but it seems like it would have made more sense in the middle or beginning, when she was ready to accept her fate. I'm not sure there was any thought put into it, since you never really learn who actually shot her in the first place (Max wasn't actually present at the overlook when you heard the gunshot, unless you count another timeline Max somehow phasing into existence at that point, and doing the deed).

Only because she had no full personality, and them Max put her personality together... sort of it...

[Scheißhaufen Klaus]

Originally posted by peter4i4ik:

Some episodes here were written by Maya - what he copied, but most of the plot was definitely bad copy done by Colmenero from LIS1

I kinda like chapter 2 separately, the familiar vibe hitting, and chapters 1 and 3 are not bad honestly snapping turtle flirting scene does have nice text in it, but im not praising you Prof. Colmenero your shortcomings ruin the whole experience.