CohhCarnage's 'childish dialogue' opinion. I agree.

[YorkiPudd]

A great summary of the No1 issue I also have with the game: The writing.

https://youtu.be/gOs-p2eHXrg

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Cohh puts the nail on the head. The game feels at times like the dialog was was written by a child psychologist that has never actually interacted with a child.
I also agree with him about the positives he mentions too.

[Viper]

His review was very Positive...He loves the game. You take one minor negative point and make it seem like he hated the game. Watch the video please. He said the story was great. He likes everything about the game. All hes talking about is the comments made by your companions as you move through the world. Them giving you hints on what to do. good luck making this review a negative. Maybe you should listen to it again. The OP does not even seem to know what Cohh is referring to.

[YorkiPudd]

No need to watch again.
Minor point? Of all the things an adult RPG needs , No1 is realistic conflict between party members, deep discussions and opposing views written purely from that characters perspective. I've found no such discussions in the whole game. For an intended 18+ audience, there is little respect for the players intelligence. It's seemingly written for a very young audience that only listens and nods IMO. I'll say again, it would have been superb as a new IP, a starting point for new RPG players, but for an adult audience in the Dragon Age universe, it completely misses the mark.