I'm writing this review with a heavy heart. When I saw this game, I immediately thought it had potential, put it on my wishlist, and bought it a few days after its release. However, I was let down. The game does offer an option to play in English, but it's a horrible translation that makes it very clear that the text was just machine translated, without any editing (example: wrong pronouns for the main character, the usage of same words (made up example: she was a pretty and pretty girl)). I can not understand this game, as the machine translation makes it incredibly tough to make sense of anything. I am glad that the developers thought of the English audience, however, this is not very helpful and a little investment into a translator or editor could go a long way. It saddens me to do this, but I am unfortunately refunding this product. If the developers ever decide to improve the translation, though, I will certainly buy this again, as I do want to experience it the way it can be experienced as a native speaker.

The art is indeed gorgeous and the design is really good. However, the english translation had some missing untranslated text, and when you get to those "scenes" it becomes quite the mess....
Also, don't expect lovey dovey stuff. You can check the DLC page, so you can get an idea of what are you in for.

Bought the game figured id give it a try..
This game is basically S&M / BDSM Lesbian fan-service VN with a slight psychological and choices matter genre.

Although it does have an interesting story it is a slight psychological game that messes with the players emotions and you MUST choose the correct choices to get the Proper Chapter Endings.

The translation in this game is completely terrible...
Its like the developers simply copied/pasted the translation from Google..
most of the translation Half Makes sense and even then it ruins the story as your trying to understand the story of the game.

Id honestly buy this when its cheaper $20 dollars... it is expensive
you can play other games which are cheaper than this that have much better English translation.

The game does include some voice lines which are spoken in Japanese.. but not everything.

The translation definitely ruins the game-play and not to mention the game is 100% fan-service and emotional manipulation. I thought there would be some sort of love story involved in this VN given the description or title? but it turns into some weird f*cked up sadistic type stuff which is not my thing.. iv noticed lots of Yuri VN's are using these types of genres which i really dont understand.. id prefer to read something that has a unique story good character development not something that seems gross disturbing or purely for fan service..

In Fallen Girl, you take on the role of Brandy, noble heiress of the Boleto family. Brandy wakes up in a strange room, in chains, before the witch Elena. Elena proceeds to torture Brandy with various sexual devices with the aim of making the virtuous noblewoman a wanton slave to sexual desire. Will she succumb or resist?

At least, that's the gist of what I could get out of the story. The translation is abysmal. I'm assuming it's machine translated and this is the clearest evidence yet that machine translations are years away from being an adequate substitute to human beings for anything other than simple sentences. I posted some screenshots in the Community Hub, but here are just a few examples of the kind of writing you'll see:

"In particular, the hot abdomen, so that you can not help the legs to the inside of the squeeze rub"
"A few fumbling, you still can not find any clues, you want to be calm a little to think, but in the end, only to be more impatient."
"Understatement of the cold statement, so that the restless body suddenly solidified"
"Do you feel confused or confused?"

As far as I'm concerned, it really doesn't qualify as English. It's not hyperbole to say that I'm guessing upwards of 75% of the sentences in the game are either untranslated from the native language, don't make sense, or have spelling or grammatical errors. It's extremely bad. Having said that, what I did make out was fairly decent, and in fact, if this were properly translated, I'd certainly recommend it as following Elena go all out on her mission to train Brandy, using dildo machines and other fun devices to force her into orgasm is fairly enjoyable; at least the parts that make sense.

The story takes place over four chapters and has five endings, three bad ones, a normal ending, and the true ending. At the beginning of each chapter are a series of questions that determine the outcome. I found both the art and the music to be quite good overall. There are some annoyances, however, like Auto Skip doesn't stop on unread text or hiding the text box doesn't hide the buttons (though the gallery doesn't have graphics on screen so the CG is clean for screenshots).

I truly believe OTAKU Plan should not be allowed to claim this game supports English; it's that bad, and it's enough that I simply cannot recommend it to anybody looking for a story written in coherent English.

*The DLC patch provides uncensored, non-mosaic'd visuals.

Boring, nothing but text, no animations; just still pictures. There was a tiny bit spoken in Japanese, but not being able to understand what is spoken is a disadvantage. I have a massive collection of anime; but this is the only one that has board me to fall half asleep instead of keeping me up, what a waste of money. (Should have put it towards the next blu-ray instead)

For folks who are curious if they end up together, sadly they didn't. Furthermore, MC decided to celibate in the true ending and in the normal ending, she ended up getting assassinated whether she decides to side with Elena or not, that is, if you manage to get to the Final Chapter. Lastly, The English translation is so bad that it feels like the Developers of this game just used Google Translate as a means to translate the text in this Visual Novel and here is one of the examples of the VN dialogue: "Herro, Miss Brandy how are you awakening" I ♥♥♥♥ you ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ not.
As for the CG "plot", it feels inconsistent, like the dialogue is not on par with the CG. The only redemption of this VN is the art, it's like Cyberpunk except it's hentai on a weird medieval era type of a plot.

Note: I played with the DLC installed

The CGs are nice, and the chapters and bad ends can be replayed after going through them but, the English version is just not good. I wouldn't mind it if there were minimal awkward phrasing in each chapter but, the 1st chapter was already a pain to read, especially at the H scenes.

Game is still buggy, not able to continue to play, black scree after choice or dialog.

Very sexy,i love it. :)

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