Tips on how to make my dark magician deck better

[𝕁𝕒𝕔𝕜𝕝𝕖]

https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2762873508

[Lazer]

引用自 Midnight Ushiro シ：

引用自 Lazer：

-Eternal Soul is the most important card for DM archetype and there is a Dark Magician field spell card at SR (Magicians Salvation its called i think?) who can search you and set this trap card on an instant. You should have x1 Solemn Judgement from the bundle deal. Obviously running 3 Solemn Judgments is better but more expensive (UR) thats why I recommended using aditional Fake Trap cards (2 or 3) which is just a Rare to protect Eternal Soul from Twin Twister and Harpies Feather duster.

-Youre running too much cards cut it to 42max

-Skill drain (SR) is very recommended for DM, a second DM as well

ive actually updated it a few times since i posted this according to other peoples suggestions and my own creativity.

https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2762873508

let me know what you think? i created it in a way where id always have a immortal dark magician on the field at least at all times unless im super unlucky on my first draw

-You can remove Mahad or set the card at 1, the problem is its very unlikely to draw it and the start of your hand the card can get a brick. I am not sure maybe you can draw him with Soul Servant but then again you only need 1 copy.
-try getting as close to 40 cards as possible, remove the normal rarity cards at the top for example
-3 copies of Skill Drain are useful if you have them, and Torrential Tribute
-You dont need 3 times Dark Magician girl just 1 or 2, you special summon her with the field spell from the Graveyard
-You should have a free copy of link spider from some free link deck you got, use that in the extra deck to get your DM to the Graveyard. With Eternal Soul its important to constantly re-summoning your DM in order to banish your opponents card with Dark Magical Circle, in your turn + his/her turn. Thats the main strength of DM archtype.
-You should have two copies of Eternal Soul, and 3 copies of the field spell.

[𝕁𝕒𝕔𝕜𝕝𝕖]

引用自 Lazer：

引用自 Midnight Ushiro シ：

ive actually updated it a few times since i posted this according to other peoples suggestions and my own creativity.

https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2762873508

let me know what you think? i created it in a way where id always have a immortal dark magician on the field at least at all times unless im super unlucky on my first draw

-You can remove Mahad or set the card at 1, the problem is its very unlikely to draw it and the start of your hand the card can get a brick. I am not sure maybe you can draw him with Soul Servant but then again you only need 1 copy.
-try getting as close to 40 cards as possible, remove the normal rarity cards at the top for example
-3 copies of Skill Drain are useful if you have them, and Torrential Tribute
-You dont need 3 times Dark Magician girl just 1 or 2, you special summon her with the field spell from the Graveyard
-You should have a free copy of link spider from some free link deck you got, use that in the extra deck to get your DM to the Graveyard. With Eternal Soul its important to constantly re-summoning your DM in order to banish your opponents card with Dark Magical Circle, in your turn + his/her turn. Thats the main strength of DM archtype.
-You should have two copies of Eternal Soul, and 3 copies of the field spell.

thank you!

[obelisk4]

I would remove the Cup of Aces and the Reload

[Manslayer]

Get the deck down to 40 by cutting cards that require specific combos and aren't largely effective outside of said combo. For example breaker is pretty useless. He is slow and requires an opponent to have a backrow on top of that a lot of backrow have graveyard effects. Reload is a worse magical mallet, but either way drop it. Drop Dark Magician girl to 1 or 2. Run Pot of Extravagance and get rid of cup of ace, or just drop cup of ace.

Fill your extra deck up to 15, even if you don't really use them much. Link monsters are always useful and easy to get out.

Good advice for how to improve any deck is play test it and find what cards are more or less useful and when you draw them you go "uuuuhg". Every card draw should improve your hand not clunk it up.

Add two Kaijus of any type. Get close to 40 cards. Remove cards that are weak on their own, example reload. Cut down on heavy combo cards.