- setting and premise sound interesting - not clear why grandma moved out - not clear why we moved in - not clear why what the "voice" said had any relevance - not clear about property: either we own the house or we don't. if we wake up to a bulldozer in the face that would give some closure on that - a lot of reference to the above, feels disjointed without covering the basics. conclusions seem to happen from the rear end, rather than building up fact by fact - people seem to switch between awkward, une...