Geometric Sniper
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YAW Studios  [developer] Jul 25, 2020 @ 11:36am
Do you have any suggestions for improving our translation?
We are a small studio and for this reason the translation into English was done by ourselves. It can certainly be improved, so we are opening this topic to anyone who wants to help or has any suggestions for improvement. We will be happy with your help!

Soon we will also make the translation available in Portuguese and we intend to translate the game into other languages.

What language would you like to see our game in? You can take advantage of this topic to tell us too.
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Super_Facts Aug 8, 2020 @ 8:14pm 
I am not a Translator but I am a native English speaker, I am willing to help where I can.
YAW Studios  [developer] Aug 10, 2020 @ 7:05pm 
Originally posted by Super_Facts:
I am not a Translator but I am a native English speaker, I am willing to help where I can.

Hi Super_Facts! Thank you so much for your support!:steamhappy:
Thank you for an interesting game. I would like the game to be translated into Russian.
YAW Studios  [developer] Aug 14, 2020 @ 4:46am 
Originally posted by Santa:
Thank you for an interesting game. I would like the game to be translated into Russian.

Hi Santa! Thank you very much for playing our game and for the suggestion!

We would also like to translate it into Russian!

We are looking at ways to make this possible.

We are happy that you found the game interesting.:steamhappy:

If you can, feel free to leave a Review, it is very important for us.

We hope you continue to enjoy the game.

Many new features are to come!

Thank you!
the fourth man Sep 15, 2020 @ 7:47am 
I would like to see it translated to spanish
YAW Studios  [developer] Sep 15, 2020 @ 10:52am 
Originally posted by the fourth man:
I would like to see it translated to spanish


Hi the fourth man! Thank you so much for playing our game and for the Review!:steamhappy:

We are glad you liked the game!

Thanks for the sugestion! In the future we intend to implement more languages and Spanish is one of them.

Many new features are to come!

Thank you!
JPlea$ant Sep 15, 2020 @ 12:28pm 
Loving the game. So far as translations go it could use some proof reading for proper capital letters, punctuation and such in journals before it gets translated too far.
YAW Studios  [developer] Sep 15, 2020 @ 6:14pm 
Originally posted by JPlea$ant:
Loving the game. So far as translations go it could use some proof reading for proper capital letters, punctuation and such in journals before it gets translated too far.

Hi JPlea$ant! Thank you so much for playing our game!
We are glad you liked the game.:steamhappy:
We are a small studio, but we are looking for ways to improve translation and have more language options.
Thank you for your feedback!
If you can, feel free to leave a Review, it is very important for us.
We hope you continue to enjoy the game.
Many new features are to come!
Thank you!
Allisandre Nov 10, 2020 @ 5:47pm 
If you can, feel free to leave a review, it is very important to us.

First time I played this, it was okay.
But it is troublesome to reset progress just to get the achievements.
Level Select or restart the specific level where you missed the achievement would be nice.
People have been giving feedback about it but all we get is a canned response. You ask for feedback but don't really listen so there's no point.

There are a bunch of typos here and there which could have been easily proofread.

Many new features aren't as enticing if feedback is being taken for granted. :)

Lastly, please stop the canned response and asking for reviews..
YAW Studios  [developer] Nov 10, 2020 @ 7:29pm 
Originally posted by Allisandre:
If you can, feel free to leave a review, it is very important to us.

First time I played this, it was okay.
But it is troublesome to reset progress just to get the achievements.
Level Select or restart the specific level where you missed the achievement would be nice.
People have been giving feedback about it but all we get is a canned response. You ask for feedback but don't really listen so there's no point.

There are a bunch of typos here and there which could have been easily proofread.

Many new features aren't as enticing if feedback is being taken for granted. :)

Lastly, please stop the canned response and asking for reviews..

Hi Allisandre Thank you very much for playing our game!

They are not automatic responses, we use some standards to streamline the process.

We really listened to everything the community says, many things were implemented in the game thanks to the community, but we do not always have the resources or time to execute everything we would like.

We are a small development studio and we work on our projects in our spare time, we love what we do but we have to work in other jobs to earn money which decreases working time in the studio.

Regarding the translation, we will check everything again, it seems that the correction we had made was not enough. Thank you for letting us know.

The "Replay" mode is already available in the game, this way you can play any mission as many times as necessary to improve your score or get an achievement, this mode is enabled when you finish the adventure mode.

We hope you continue to enjoy the game.

Thank you for contacting us!
Keyfeğen Dec 20, 2020 @ 12:39pm 
Hi!
If you are interested, we can translate your game into Turkish!

You can always contact us: info@localsheep.com

Or it would be awesome to be informed about how to communicate!
Awaiting your answer. ^^
Last edited by Keyfeğen; Dec 20, 2020 @ 12:41pm
HazoVigi Aug 13, 2021 @ 12:27pm 
Hello, I really liked your game so I did some proof reading on the journal and mission intel and found some mistakes, so here are my suggestions.

Journal
  • Day 1: I was planning on retire... --> I was planning on retiring
  • Day 2: At trainings camps... --> At training camps
    If I had really listened it --> If I had really listened to them (them = "they warned us" from the previous sentence)
    Enough of thinking --> Enough thinking
  • Day 5: Will I end like him? --> Will I end up like him?
  • Day 6: What eases me is that I might have a chance to have my revenge! --> What eases me is that I might get a chance to have my revenge! (it's not wrong but it sounds a bit weird to have two "have" there)
  • Day 7: I wish I have listened to her while I still could... --> I wish I had listened to her while I still could...
  • Day 8: What they don't realize is that we not always... --> What they don't realize is that we don't always...
    I keep on trying to convince myself of it. --> I keep trying to convince myself of it.
Mission Intel
  • Mssion 2: Luckly --> Luckily
  • Mission 4: ...about a possible attack to the chancellor --> ...about a possible attack on the chancellor
  • Mission 5: ...found out the location of lab... --> ...found out the location of the lab...
    To help our agents getting in... --> To help our agents get in...
  • Mission 7: Crime: Responsible for many biologicals attacks. --> Responsible for many biological attacks.

I didn't realise I wrote this much lol, at least I hope it helps a bit.
YAW Studios  [developer] Aug 15, 2021 @ 7:27pm 
Originally posted by HazoVigi:

Hi HazoVigi! Thank you so much for playing our game!
We are glad you enjoyed our game!:steamhappy:
Thank you very much for reviewing our text, soon in the next update we will implement the fixes.
We are a small indie studio and our intention in all our games is to seek the best possible experience for our players, for this reason feedback is very important!
And if you need help or support, don't hesitate to use the forums in the community center.
Thank you!
X4N4X Dec 24, 2024 @ 2:46pm 
love your game...

but, you have to fix the hitboxes !!! how many times i hit the target and it did not register !!
kills me!

Greetings from Switzerland...
YAW Studios  [developer] Jan 9 @ 3:31am 
Originally posted by X4N4X:

Hello, thank you for your feedback.
We will work on making improvements to provide you with an even better experience with our game.

Big hugs to Switzerland, an amazing country! 💛
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