You need MUCH clearer language in tutorial missions

[Strummer]

"Click on a waypoint, a grenade or a door to jump at the moment of the corresponding action."

What???

I do not know what this can possibly mean. Even if I change "jump at" to "jump to", it makes no sense at all. I am very experienced in games of this type (including Doorkickers) but attempting to make sense of these tutorial instructions simply gave me a headache. I have no idea how to apply the apparent purpose of this lesson to the mission itself.

You will need MUCH clearer language in your tutorial missions, and not just this one and the demo movies have to move either much more slowly or be controllable by the player.

I cannot figure out for the life of me how to plan a coordinated breech.

I will be putting the demo away until you can make the tutorials far clearer, more logical and less frustrating.

[GFX47]

Thank you for your feedback!
I'll try to improve that. Do you have any suggestions?

[Strummer]

Yes, I can help you out with this but you will have to send me some kind of written document with the text input for all those tutorial scenarios so that I can rewrite them for you in clear English.

[Rabid Urko]

English is not everyones native language :)

[Zilican]

@Strummer While it's not perfect english, It's easily understood. When you click on a a waypoint, a door or an explosion (flashbang/grenade etc), it will jump to that point on the timeline.

[GFX47]

I'll try to remove the texts altogether in the next version and try to make more explicit videos instead. Nobody reads tutorial texts anyway T_T

[Fly in the Sky]

Originally posted by GFX47:

Thank you for your feedback!
I'll try to improve that. Do you have any suggestions?

What's your native language?It seems like that non-native English speakers usually say some complicated sentences(just like myself)

[GFX47]

I'm French.

[Strummer]

Originally posted by GFX47:

Nobody reads tutorial texts anyway T_T

Oh yes they do.

[FroBodine]

They absolutely do. I love a good, comprehensive tutorial, and read every word. Please don't dumb down the tutorials.

Have the tutorials improved since this thread started back in February?

[GFX47]

Yep, I've iterated on them several times since February.

[FroBodine]

Great! Thank you.