People Playground Fanfiction - Alive

[stanleyfrodo1]

I've decided to make a fanfiction because why not, if you like this fanfiction let me know and I will continue the story, I will be splitting this story into parts, all Criticisms and advices are welcomed

[MeerKatJack]

I just realized how Mart was introduced- he was almost brutally murdered by a zombie

[gordon freeman]

christmas, just a day away

[I ran over a mother in 2007]

引用自 benchamin：

christmas, just a day away

KRIMAAAAAAA

[WHAT]

引用自 Eggdoge：

引用自 benchamin：

christmas, just a day away

KRIMAAAAAAA

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XTrnSJLXGBg

[I ran over a mother in 2007]

引用自 nooooooo：

引用自 Eggdoge：

KRIMAAAAAAA

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XTrnSJLXGBg

oh but it will be soon

[WHAT]

引用自 Eggdoge：

引用自 nooooooo：

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XTrnSJLXGBg

oh but it will be soon

it will be not kirma in 2022

[I ran over a mother in 2007]

引用自 nooooooo：

引用自 Eggdoge：

oh but it will be soon

it will be not kirma in 2022

krima*

[MeerKatJack]

引用自 stanleyfrodo1：

引用自 MeerKatJack：

Ok, thanks! I'll write it later if I have time.

Alright then.

引用自 stanleyfrodo1：

引用自 MeerKatJack：

Alive: Chapter 2
Part 1
Today is Christmas Eve. I’ve been waiting for a new computer for a while, but I think it’s probably under the tree. The reason I’ve been waiting has had to do with how horribly my current computer runs, because it is just a junky office computer. I mostly want a new one, however, because it’ll run one of my favorite games: People Playground.

There’s been a rumor around Steam about a mod by someone known as “TheCreator1991” about one of his old mods, called Alive, which he reuploaded as “Living Humans.” It’s a cool mod, that gives humans AIs that make them almost sentient, however the rumor is that in the original mod, Alive, a malicious entity resides deep within the mod’s code. Although, TheCreator1991 states that nothing of that sort has ever been there.

Tomorrow, once I get the computer set up, I’m going to download the mod and see for myself.

That's pretty darn good, I would recommend maybe making a third paragraph, but you did very well, I'm gonna give it three days to see if the other two will make there own trial chapter, if they don't within those three days i'll make your story line canon.

I think no one else is gonna make their trial

[gordon freeman]

引用自 MeerKatJack：

引用自 stanleyfrodo1：

Alright then.

引用自 stanleyfrodo1：

That's pretty darn good, I would recommend maybe making a third paragraph, but you did very well, I'm gonna give it three days to see if the other two will make there own trial chapter, if they don't within those three days i'll make your story line canon.

I think no one else is gonna make their trial

i would but my storywriting fricking sucks

[MeerKatJack]

引用自 benchamin：

引用自 MeerKatJack：

I think no one else is gonna make their trial

i would but my storywriting fricking sucks

Random fact- The first paragraph of the trial part I wrote is mostly real, because I’m getting a gaming pc for Christmas and I have a junky old school computer

[John Sam]

引用自 nooooooo：

引用自 stanleyfrodo1：

Oh he was joking, there is no Human x Android in this story.

it will be funny if there was one in the story
but hey

THATS JUST A PPG THEORY!

*Insert game theory music * AHHHHHH MY BONES

[WHAT]

引用自 MeerKatJack：

引用自 benchamin：

i would but my storywriting fricking sucks

Random fact- The first paragraph of the trial part I wrote is mostly real, because I’m getting a gaming pc for Christmas and I have a junky old school computer

based of a true story?!

[MeerKatJack]

引用自 nooooooo：

引用自 MeerKatJack：

Random fact- The first paragraph of the trial part I wrote is mostly real, because I’m getting a gaming pc for Christmas and I have a junky old school computer

based of a true story?!

uhhh maybe

[MeerKatJack]

I dunno why I'm sharing this here, but here's a Christmas thing I made: https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2692390535

[stanleyfrodo1]

引用自 MeerKatJack：

引用自 stanleyfrodo1：

Alright then.

引用自 stanleyfrodo1：

That's pretty darn good, I would recommend maybe making a third paragraph, but you did very well, I'm gonna give it three days to see if the other two will make there own trial chapter, if they don't within those three days i'll make your story line canon.

I think no one else is gonna make their trial

You're probably right, so once it becomes the 25th, you'll have my complete permission to create a canon sequal.

So chances are, i'll have my hands full with my next fanfiction project as well as another major project, so it may be a while before i post again on this discussion, I want to thank you all for reading my story to the end, it means so much to me that you all enjoyed it.

MeerKatjack, by tomorrow the torch will be passed on to you, take your time on your story and don't try to rush yourself, that's one mistake i made during this story. i'll check in tomorrow if I have the chance to make sure no one else tries to steal your place.

This is my goodbye for now, again thank you all.