Ori and the Will of the Wisps

Ori and the Will of the Wisps

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Democracy Officer Gehenna Mar 12, 2020 @ 12:09am
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[Spoiler] I... kinda hate the ending.
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So, Ori dies.
Now, I know the obvious two responses.
First, that he didn't die, he became a tree. Well... the tree references Ori in the third person, and for all intents and purposes IS a different person.
Second, that what is wrong with a bittersweet ending? The answer is nothing, when done well.

The 'sacrifice' at the end basically comes from nowhere. There is absolutely no foreshadowing at all until at the VERY end. This utterly undercuts the ending to a rather startling degree. It left it feeling hollow, empty, and bad to me.
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GSandSDS Apr 27, 2020 @ 5:49am 
Originally posted by Where is my medicine?:
Well, yes, but they can't even speak I guess. They are only narrators for player but I doubt that they can talk to someone else. Well, there was a scene in OatBF when Ori was told about Kuro, but I believe that Sein told that, no the tree.

So the only way they can "interact" is to create pulses of light I think.
The Spirit Willow also talked to Ori. Maybe they both used their specific light (Sein, Seir) as ther voice, but in the case of the Willow it was definitely the Willow itself who communicated to Ori, be it through the light or not. In the case of Seir, we also can see that Kwolog (a non-spirit) can understand what Seir (the Voice of the Forest back then) said. So, it's thinkable, that other non-spirits can understand Seir too and in extend Ori as the new Spirit Tree (at least if Ori talks through Seir).
Ganymede Apr 27, 2020 @ 6:25am 
Originally posted by GSandSDS:
So, it's thinkable, that other non-spirits can understand Seir too
Perhaps, but we have no evidence for this in-game. From the moment Seir is introduced to us by Kwolok as a Voice of the Forest, the wisp only addresses Ori. No character ever talks directly to the wisps or to Seir once they're whole, even when they're the thing being talked about. Likewise, neither the wisps nor Seir talk directly to any character except Ori, even when they may know something another character would want to know.

This goes for Sein too.
Scott Apr 27, 2020 @ 8:03am 
if you want to talk about deaths in games, specifically the type Mosh brought up where they arbitrarily bring characters back like in JRPGs, the first Ori game is guilty of this very sin.

Spoilers for the first game, you should've played it already if you're here so, i'm not going to bother using spoiler tags.

Naru dies at the beginning of Ori and the Blind Forest, and then Gumo uses the light to bring her back, some have criticised this moment as being incredibly cheap and in a way it is. So the first game is far from perfect story wise.

But Ori and the Blind Forest is not a bad game simply for this moment and nor is Will of the Wisps for its shoddy ending either.

But while i'm here I want to address another thing Thomas said since its been on my mind:

Originally posted by thomasmahler:
First of all, we get a ton of emails, tweets and general responses whenever we ship a game and I think it's fair to say that most people were really happy with the ending that we chose.
Argumentum ad populum. A logical fallacy meaning that it must be true since a lot of people agree with it. I could say that too, look at how many people in this thread agree with me, I MUST be right! No, that's not how this works.

First off, most people don't complain; and quite a lot of people are happy with anything you present to them. A lot of people won't have even beaten the game. Some won't know how to contact you in the first place.

Saying that is a way of trying to dismiss our negative opinions by saying "Hey all these people like our ending, so its fine for me to ignore you".

This is why some people think your response here is patronising. Your overall post there was incredibly dismissive.
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GSandSDS Apr 27, 2020 @ 8:18am 
Originally posted by Ganymede:
Perhaps, but we have no evidence for this in-game. From the moment Seir is introduced to us by Kwolok as a Voice of the Forest, the wisp only addresses Ori. No character ever talks directly to the wisps or to Seir once they're whole, even when they're the thing being talked about.
Kwolog directly commented to something the Voice of the Forest said when it was introduced to Ori. And when Kwolog can hear the Voice why shouldn't other be able to hear it too?

Voice: "(...) The Wellspring needs us."
Kwolog: "Yes. Go to the Wellspring (...)"

Originally posted by Scott:
Argumentum ad populum. A logical fallacy meaning that it must be true since a lot of people agree with it. I could say that too, look at how many people in this thread agree with me, I MUST be right! No, that's not how this works.
In this case aguing with "Argumentum ad populum" is a little bit problematic. This counter-argument only works really well if there is an objective truth. But "good/bad ending" has no real objective criterias, only subjective ones. There are some "rules" that can try to tell you if a story/ending will be perceived as good oder bad boils, but all they can do is give you some sort of prediction. In the end boils down to the question how many people like it and don't like it. When the vast majority thinks a story is good, then it will be decleared as good and vice versa. You could say, then it (at least statistically) "makes" the story good or bad.
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98misti Apr 27, 2020 @ 8:31am 
Originally posted by Scott:
if you want to talk about deaths in games, specifically the type Mosh brought up where they arbitrarily bring characters back like in JRPGs, the first Ori game is guilty of this very sin.

Naru dies at the beginning of Ori and the Blind Forest, and then Gumo uses the light to bring her back, some have criticised this moment as being incredibly cheap and in a way it is. So the first game is far from perfect story wise.
Yup. You forgot to mention Ori also dies in BL, but the Spirit Tree revived him/her.
Still; at least BL’s story doesn’t collapse under its own weight.
Ganymede Apr 27, 2020 @ 8:55am 
Originally posted by GSandSDS:
Kwolog directly commented to something the Voice of the Forest said when it was introduced to Ori. And when Kwolog can hear the Voice why shouldn't other be able to hear it too?

Voice: "(...) The Wellspring needs us."
Kwolog: "Yes. Go to the Wellspring (...)"
Good catch! It's subtle, but that does confirm others can hear the lights too. Makes one wonder why lights / trees don't talk to the forest creatures more often.
jeremygritton Apr 27, 2020 @ 8:57am 
Hi everyone, I'm the Lead Writer & Art Director for Ori and the Will of the Wisps. Although I didn't read this entire thread, I did notice that for some people, there is a concern that the game doesn't properly foreshadow the end of Ori's arc. I think some comments mentioned there was no foreshadowing at all until the Windtorn Ruins. That is certainly where the hints become more obvious, but there were more along the way which I'll outline below.

Something I find interesting is that in life, we don't always recognize everything for what it is while it's happening. It's only with hindsight that we can look back and see the importance or relevance of different moments in our lives. In the same way, I think there's value in only recognizing some of the story's clues on a second play through, with an additional level of awareness.

Taking that into account, some of these hints I believe can and will be picked up on by perceptive players in the moment. Others are more noticeable the second time around. Knowing the ending gives you the frame of reference to make those connections and experience the story on a different level than the first time.

Prologue:

Starting Screen - The game begins with Ori standing out looking to the Spirit Tree in the distance. Birds fly across the screen. In this opening visual, the story of the game is already presented - Ori (the present), through a yearning for flight (Ku) will be carried into the future (becoming a Spirit Tree) This is not something that a player is expected to pick up on during their first play through. But if you were to play the game again, it becomes more apparent that we're foreshadowing everything to come from the very first moment.


Prologue winter season - Naru and Ori can be seen in the background, building a snowman representing Naru's father (recognizable if you’ve played Definitive Edition). This is another tribute to the cycle of life: The memory of one generation living on through love, and being taught to the generations that follow. Even after someone is 'gone', they live on.

Kuro constellation in the sky - If you find the secret area in the prologue, you will see a constellation form the spirit of Kuro in the sky, watching over Ku. Ori's sacrifice in WOTW echoes Kuro's sacrifice in Blind Forest. After Kuro's death, Ori's family took on the responsibility of caring for her last child. Much of the game revolves around Ori living up to that implicit promise. Either by helping her achieve her goal of flight, searching for her, or doing everything possible to protect her. Seeing Kuro's imagery in the sky shows us that even after her sacrifice, she lives on, albeit in a different way than before. This is another nod to the culmination of Ori's story, and that Ori will live on as a protector, even after entering a new phase of life.

Narration - In WOTW the narrator does not refer to Ori in 3rd person, and instead uses 'we' or 'our' when referencing Ori and Ku. To clear any confusion: the Spirit Tree is the narrator for Blind Forest, and Ori is the narrator for Will of the Wisps. This switch plays on an established expectation, and for many people this leads to a satisfying moment as they realize the narrator was Ori this time around. An observant player could notice this change in narration style between games, but it's more likely this becomes clear on a second play through. Once you're aware of the narrator's identity, it's very obvious when playing again.

Act 1:

When Kwolok tells us the Willow's backstory, we learn that it was a natural event that caused the light to shatter. It was the Willow's end: It's life cycle was complete. This is already hinting to a difference from Blind Forest, where the light was stolen from the tree in an unnatural event. Here, the tree grew too old and frail, and could no longer continue. This is an important piece of information: It foreshadows that the Willow cannot return in the same fashion as the previous game. Many players will have the same expectation of the game as Blind Forest: that we will simply heal the tree. We don't want to give everything away here, but the situation being similar yet different is touched on in this cutscene.

Act2:

Mora - Tells us it is good we retrieved the light, and that it belongs where it will shine the brightest. There is a double meaning here: The wisp belongs with us, where it will shine brightest, not in Mouldwood. Also, the light that will be reborn belongs with us, where it will shine brightest, not with the Willow.

Kwolok - Implores us to watch after the Moki for him. This is alluding to Ori's transition from the role of a child into the role of a guardian/parent. Ori will take on the responsibility of being a protector, to stop the pain and suffering that others have gone through. The transference of responsibility between Kwolok and Ori is direct foreshadowing of the transference of responsibility between the Willow and Ori at the end of the game.

Kwolok also mentions that we may not be able to undo all the damage (hinting to the Willow, and Shriek) but we can still give Niwen a second chance (a new age of balance). When he asks us to watch over the Moki and Niwen, he tells us we may be the only one who can (hinting to the succession of the Willow Tree)

Baur - Mentions that the summer of the past is gone, never to return. A new summer will rise to take its place. Although it appears Baur is speaking only about the seasons in the Reach, the subtext of his statement is about the larger cycle of life. The summer of the past (The age of the Willow) is gone, never to return. But because of us, a new summer (the age of the Ori Tree) will rise to take its place.

Planting the tree in Wellspring Glades - Kii tells us 'Perhaps there is hope, yet, for new life. Perhaps the last seed will become the first tree.' On the first reading, it appears that he is simply talking about the Ancestral tree from the side quest. The subtext here is that the last seed (Niwen views Ori as the last spirit) will become the first tree (a new spirit tree that will be the start of a new age). Ori will bring hope for new life (a new age of balance). The creation of the Ancestral Tree in the Glades with the last seed is a microcosm for Ori’s story.

Act 3:

Windtorn Ruins' murals - The Voice of the Forest gives us a more detailed understanding of the relationship between a light and its corresponding Spirit Tree. Since we're close to the end of the game, this is where the hints become much more obvious. Seir reiterates Kwolok's statement from earlier in the game, citing 'the Willow's passing', to remind us that the Willow's life has ended.

The Willow - The Willow's speech gets even more direct, since by this point we want to make sure the themes and ideas we've been building over the course of the game are understood. However, even that might not be enough. For some people, they might not make the full connection until the sapling sprouts from the ground. Or, they might not realize this tree is the same entity as Ori, until it calls itself Ori in first person.

My reply is getting long so I'll try to wrap it up. There were two main points brought up in the initial post:

"the tree references Ori in the third person, and for all intents and purposes IS a different person" - The narrator in Blind Forest is the Spirit Tree and references Ori in third person. The narrator in WOTW is the Ori tree and does not reference Ori in third person. This might be confusing the first time around, as the game does play on your expectation that it's the same narrator. But, they are different entities and the switch in style confirms that the tree in the epilogue is Ori.

Someone also asked if the Ori Tree can communicate with their family, which appears to be hinted at during the montage. In Blind Forest, the Spirit Tree does communicate with Ori while telling us the tale of Kuro’s misguided will. At the end of WOTW, the Willow Tree also communicates with Ori. While not explicitly shown, it stands to reason that yes, the Ori Tree is able to communicate with Naru, Gumo, and Ku.

"There is absolutely no foreshadowing at all until at the VERY end" - I hope the examples posted above have shown the foreshadowing in the game.

That said, the right amount of foreshadowing is a delicate balance. I've seen streams where players pick up on what's happening well in advance and predict the ending. But I've also seen comments where people said they were blind-sided by the ending and it wasn't foreshadowed at all (or only very late). Everyone is going to experience the story a little differently - for some the foreshadowing will be too obvious, for others not nearly enough, and still there will be others who find it to be just the right amount.

Even if the hints aren't completely on the nose while playing, we wanted to create a subconscious impression of the theme of the game. Whether or not that was successful will of course be up to each individual's experience. Different people will have different tastes about what was the right amount, or just how heavy-handed should it have been. That's perfectly fine.

The best I can do is outline some examples of foreshadowing above, to help show that there was planning and thought put into it. Little breadcrumbs were sprinkled throughout the game. This may or may not make a difference to anyone, but might still be interesting to read about the thought process. Thanks for your comments and interest in Will of the Wisps' story.


Ganymede Apr 27, 2020 @ 8:57am 
Originally posted by GSandSDS:
Originally posted by Ganymede:
Argumentum ad populum. A logical fallacy meaning that it must be true since a lot of people agree with it. I could say that too, look at how many people in this thread agree with me, I MUST be right! No, that's not how this works.
In this case aguing with "Argumentum ad populum" is a little bit problematic. This counter-argument only works really well if there is an objective truth. But "good/bad ending" has no real objective criterias, only subjective ones. There are some "rules" that can try to tell you if a story/ending will be perceived as good oder bad boils, but all they can do is give you some sort of prediction. In the end boils down to the question how many people like it and don't like it. When the vast majority thinks a story is good, then it will be decleared as good and vice versa. You could say, then it (at least statistically) "makes" the story good or bad.
Careful with the quotes. Make sure you attribute the right author.
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TheForestSpirit Apr 27, 2020 @ 9:06am 
Alright this time I really am done here. It is clear to me now the Developers are not that interested in taking constructive criticism on board as shown by the response so therefore I have nothing more to say or contribute to this discussion. Nothing is going to change regardless of how we feel here that much is pretty obvious now. With that being said I will take my leave.

Disappointing really but whatever.
@jeremygritton

Thanks a lot for coming here to post that. It's very rare the writer of anything explains the mechanism behind the story in a forum and I'd like to say it's much appreciated.

I'm not really one of the people arguing about foreshadowing so much as the unpleasant implication Ori's sacrifice is more tragic than it really is. When you get down to it he's an acorn and his best case scenario really is becoming a new tree. To me, then, the critical points showing that Ori isn't suffering as a tree come from the general expectation that any acorn would like to become a tree, how he looks at the Spirit Tree at the beginning, and how he is apparently able to communicate. Personally that doesn't seem like a lot to suggest Ori is fulfilled so much as putting up with his fate.

What I think is really important is what isn't shown: Ori anticipating the restored forest. If he wants to serve as the protector of Niwen we should see a glimpse or suggestion that he's taking this role on gladly. When he makes his sacrifice everything focuses on the past and what he thinks he's losing and not what he thinks he's achieving. The end narration doesn't express Ori's opinion on anything that happened, just that it did and the Wisps willed it. We don't get the implication really that he agreed with the wisps, that he wanted it, or that he's content.

I'm just going to repost what I've written previously in case you didn't see it before because it makes my position clearer than what I just typed:
Originally posted by The Quantum of Meruit:
I personally think the biggest issue people have with Ori becoming a new Spirit Tree is that we don't quite know what that entails for Ori's subjective experience. It does seem a natural evolution since they're really just an adorable little acorn when you get down to it, but we as humans really have no clue how they as a tree might perceive the world.

One way to look at it is that they can sense things around them in a dim sort of way and emit flashes of light. That's a pretty bleak existence.

Another way to look at it is that Ori has effectively become a god. How much of Niwen can they perceive and influence? Can they move their own branches or roots at all? We don't really see a whole lot of Spirit Trees in their non-crisis lives and so we don't know what they're really capable of day-to-day. If Ori has more agency than that, then it may be that they're having the time of their life and we just don't realize it.

That's my take. Being a tree is so alien to the human experience that it's hard to view it as anything but a loss of what allows us to understand life. A loss of all of our senses and perhaps even our sense of self brings people more towards "Johnny Got His Gun," which is basically the cruelest fate imaginable, than towards a natural evolution and ascension to a higher state of being. And if someone willingly sacrifices themself to that fate we want to know it truly was willing and there was no alternative.

The way to resolve this I think is to make it clearer that Ori is not suffering while he is a tree. Maybe have him already looking forward to becoming a tree in his future before the game even begins. I think this was tried with the opening but it's not clear. Or give an extra line of dialogue that lets us know how he feels while a tree.

Originally posted by The Quantum of Meruit:
Looking back at the ending, the critical moment of mixed messaging appears to me to be when the tree is small and everyone is watering it and spreading seeds. It implies Ori has no agency because he needs the help, and so everything afterwards is colored by his apparent lack of agency to do anything except glow and possibly talk. That makes it seem far bleaker than you probably intended. To me that image evokes a visit to a grave.

Originally posted by The Quantum of Meruit:
Well I for one will say this game did make me feel for the characters, especially Ori. I'm not joking when I say I've had a hard time dealing with Ori turning into a tree. It's been a powerful grief and I've found myself lying awake in bed with my rational side articulating what I've said in this thread and my emotional side imagining Ori trapped inside himself and unable to escape. Emotionally the tree feels like a gravestone, no matter what my rational mind has said otherwise.

And this is coming from a lawyer who has been involved with some nightmarish trials.
Originally posted by TheForestSpirit:
Alright this time I really am done here. It is clear to me now the Developers are not that interested in taking constructive criticism on board as shown by the response so therefore I have nothing more to say or contribute to this discussion. Nothing is going to change regardless of how we feel here that much is pretty obvious now. With that being said I will take my leave.

Disappointing really but whatever.
Oh please, that was a very good reply by the lead writer. He literally explained why he did what he did and what he aimed to achieve. Nothing he said was wrong and certainly nothing rankled my sensibilities.
Ganymede Apr 27, 2020 @ 9:37am 
Originally posted by jeremygritton:
Someone also asked if the Ori Tree can communicate with their family, which appears to be hinted at during the montage. In Blind Forest, the Spirit Tree does communicate with Ori while telling us the tale of Kuro’s misguided will. At the end of WOTW, the Willow Tree also communicates with Ori. While not explicitly shown, it stands to reason that yes, the Ori Tree is able to communicate with Naru, Gumo, and Ku.
Thank you so much for clearing this up! Since we never heard any words it was never clear whether any non-spirits could "hear" Ori. This changes the ending from Ori's family hanging out around what may as well be a living tombstone, to the family hanging out around an active, communicating member of the family, which obviously changes the mood entirely!

By the way, I spend quite a bit of time writing up a narrative analysis. I don't know if you had any time to read through it, but it would be great to hear your thoughts. I at least tried to be objective and fair.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1boGkSECckt7JEmnFsZypARR2X90Kj8SV/edit
GSandSDS Apr 27, 2020 @ 9:46am 
Originally posted by Ganymede:
Careful with the quotes. Make sure you attribute the right author.
Sorry, Ganymede. I just used the comment button, and the system gave me your name. Maybe some content that remained in the browser cache.

@JEREMYGRITTON:
I think some of the foreshadowing I would have never recognized, since some of them are, even very poetic, also very cryptic. The "Kuro in the stars" for example still looks for me more like a very touching easter egg and less like an actual hint. On the other hand other hints are really interesting, especially the hints that tell you that you cannot go back to the old status-quo.

Still, aside from foreshadowing I think there still will be people who will point out that the question remains why the old Willow just died away without making the proper preparations for a successor before any Decay can spread. I for my self have found an answer: He didn't know when he will exactly die. Maybe the Willow even began to prepare but it was already too late. Since Ori 1 we already know that everyone makes mistakes, even Spirit Trees. But that's just "my" answer to the question. ;)

About Ori the Spirit Tree talking to family: That's good to hear. This gives the whole scene an even more hopefull tone. But there is still one question remaining that bothers me the whole time:

In the ending scene, where everyone laughes, did Ori tell a joke? :D
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Luna Spirito Apr 27, 2020 @ 10:01am 
@jeremygritton, thank you so much. You're awesome.

Originally posted by TheForestSpirit:
Disappointing really but whatever.
I agree with Quantum. I still think that Will of the Wisps' story isn't complete, but, anyway, reply from developer clarifies a lot of things.

Now I understand the sacrifice.
Originally posted by GSandSDS:
I think some of the foreshadowing I would have never recognized, since some of them are, even very poetic, also very cryptic. The "Kuro in the stars" for example still looks for me more like an emotional easter egg and less like an actual hint. On the other hand other hints are really interesting, especially the hints that tell you that you cannot go back to the old status-quo.

This is a bit of a tangent, but there's what I view as plot foreshadowing and thematic foreshadowing. Plot foreshadowing is specifically referencing things that will happen, usually by indicating what will happen or the means by which the happening will be achieved. The infamous Chekhov's Gun is the easiest example, as its mere presence implies someone is going to get shot. Otherwise why introduce the gun at all? Especially with something as enormously complicated as a video game, if something is introduced it's introduced for a reason. There just isn't the budget for the truly extraneous.

Thematic foreshadowing ties more into the emotional core of the story, foreshadowing the story's message and what you will--ideally--take away emotionally. By its nature it's very, very subtle, and it has the unfortunate catch that if someone hasn't latched onto the theme this type of foreshadowing doesn't work or gets confusing.

Personally I think there was a lot more thematic foreshadowing than plot foreshadowing, but there was still plot foreshadowing.
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