The Cursed Forest

The Cursed Forest

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Ethonoris Apr 15, 2019 @ 7:58pm
English Grammar Translation Errors
I noticed in a few of the notes and item descriptions, that there were some grammatical mistakes that I think came from translation. I had previously mentioned this in my review of the game and the developer had responded, asking me to make a list of them. So, here is a list of some of the more noticeable errors that I've found so far.

Section 2; Tourist Note, page 4:

There is a line that currently says, "I thought this trip would be the perfect time to tell Ludmila how about my feelings,"
This part should say, "I thought this trip would be the perfect time to tell Ludmila about my feelings for her,"

Section 3; I Will Save Her:

In this note, one line currently says, "In the nearest day I will take her from this settlement and go as fast as possible from here."
I think it should say, "Tomorrow, I will take her from this settlement and leave as fast as possible."

Section 3; Final Hunt:

In this note, there are several lines that need fixing. There are a few paragraphs that currently say, "That deer, he wasn't look like same as he was during our previous meetings. Once majestic, now he looks like living dead. Grow bare skin that makes his meat visible, evil lifeless eyes. Now this animal didn't embody live and nature now it was representing only death and darkness, that is around. I can see him through my window... He is watching me from far distance, same as when I was watching him few weeks before. I feel like I caught in the corner, like the animals I was hunt down but expect of animal I can choose by myself time when I am going to die. Rustle near my window distracted me from my thoughts. It wasn't a deer, somebody other try to get inside my house..."
It should say, "That deer, he didn't look the same as he did during our previous meetings. Once majestic, now he looks like the living dead, with bare skin that makes his insides visible, and evil lifeless eyes. This animal no longer embodies life and nature, but rather death and darkness. I can see him through my window... He is watching me from afar, same as I watched him a few weeks ago. I feel cornered, like the animals that I used to hunt, but unlike them, I can choose for myself when I'm going to die. Rustling near my window distracted me from my thoughts. It wasn't a deer. Somebody else was trying to get inside my house..."

Section 3; Illusion of Happiness - Part 1:

In this note, there is a line that says, "Only she felt real to me, our relationship was like taken from a romance novel."
It should say, "Only she felt real to me. Our relationship was like something out of a romance novel."

Item; Key:

The description for this item in the inventory currently says, "Key - Stop reading it. Use it for save yourself!"
It should say, "Key - Stop reading this. Use it to save yourself!"

Item; Crystal:

The description for this item in the inventory currently says, "Crystal - it is shining. warm on touch. I hope his usage is more interesting than just put it back on the same place."
I think it should say, "Crystal - It's shiny and warm to the touch. I hope I can find something more interesting to use this for, other than just putting it back where I found it."
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oku Apr 15, 2019 @ 8:05pm 
It's kind of you to take the time to note the translation errors to help improve the game.
Igor  [developer] Apr 16, 2019 @ 12:41am 
Thank you very much!
Ethonoris Apr 18, 2019 @ 3:33pm 
Thank you for taking the time to work with your game's players. That makes me very happy.
DocCovington Jun 23, 2019 @ 3:30pm 
There were several mistakes in the English version, especially in the last chapter. If someone sent me all the text, I would gladly correct it.
Igor  [developer] Jun 24, 2019 @ 12:04pm 
Hi, DocCovington!
All texts are here.
.../The Cursed Forest/assets/languages/english_xml.pak

It'll be great if it works out.
DocCovington Jun 24, 2019 @ 4:03pm 
How do I unpack the file?
Igor  [developer] Jun 26, 2019 @ 10:46am 
Using the 7-zip.
DocCovington Jun 26, 2019 @ 1:45pm 
I'm working on it. Should I send it via e-mail once I am done?
Igor  [developer] Jun 28, 2019 @ 12:12pm 
feedback@noostyche.ru
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